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    Words of a friend...

    ~Words Of a Friend~

    I was a believer in life to be myself always,
    and was asking whether I would be alive.
    Give me a reason why not to adapt in this way,
    or judge me to be guilty of so many incurable sins.
    Tell me why, or why not. Complaining way too much,
    maybe I overlooked something fatal for me.

    And I was left all alone without all hope,
    with wounds that never step aside.
    Which way to go? I do not know.
    What to believe? Don't care, just pain and misery.
    Nothing to make me feel alive.
    Each time I hear her voice it burns like thousand flames inside.

    All our lives we were meant to face each other
    Tell me why it is
    That we were destined to fight
    For a cause that is unknown

    ...I know what you might think...
    Even though I want to run away because I'm scared of being hurt.
    If this unseen barrier around me should tear away my wings,
    Still, you are so precious to me that it makes me sad.

    ...I guess... I understand...

    understand..
    You think you get it because you can read me like an open book..
    but you don't understand..
    Its not the fact that you're precious to me that makes me sad..
    It's the fact that I love you but you love someone else..
    this is what makes me sad...

    The memories faded...her voice...her actions...everything became blurry...
    It feels so close to me, yet I can't grasp it even if I extend my hands.
    Even so... Even if I can't reach it... There are things that will stay in my heart.
    Being in the same time... and looking up at the same sky... I
    f I can remember that, than even if we are far apart from each other, I believe we can be together.
    I will run forward now. If I set my goal far enough, then someday...I'll be able to reach what I aimed for.


    ~Don't know why i decided to post it.. i gues the reason is because it was written like a poem.. Anyway.. I hope you like it. It represents someone who was deeply in love and even though she died.. he still loves her and always will... this my friends.. is true love.~
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    Re: Words of a friend...

    *sigh*

    Taking various parts of songs/poems and slapping them together does not an original poem make. You have copied verbatim sections from the following:

    Caged Bird - from D.N.Angel (Anime Lyrics dot Com - Caged Bird - D.N.Angel - Anime)
    Even though I want to run away because I'm scared of being hurt.
    If this unseen barrier around me should tear away my wings,
    Still, you are so precious to me that it makes me sad.
    Truth and Tragedy - Throne of Chaos (THRONE OF CHAOS LYRICS - Pervertigo (2002))
    ...and I was left all alone
    without all hope
    with wounds that never step aside.
    Which way to go, I do not know,
    what to believe, don't care.
    Just pain and misery
    nothing to make me feel alive.

    Each time I hear her voice it burns like thousand flames inside.
    Nowhere to run, nowhere to hide.
    Why, or Why Not? - Higurashi no Naku Koro Ni ending theme (Why, or Why Not? - Katakiri Rekka « Living in a world suffused with sound)
    I was a believer in life to be myself always,
    and was asking whether I would be alive.

    Give me a reason why not to adapt in this way,
    or judge me to be guilty of so many incurable sins.
    Tell me why, or why not. Complaining way too much,
    maybe I overlooked something fatal for me.
    I'm sure if I had the time to dig deeper, I'd find that most if not all of this "poem" is plagiarized song lyrics, but I think the point is already clear...this is not your own work.

    Closing.
    sig by Pyro Psycho

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