Thread: Words to live by

This is a very random poem, kokoro! Nice poem, nevertheless.. A little more description would be nice, maybe ^ ^ Good Job, tho

I'ts just the way I've lived my life till now. it basicly means to live like you'll die tomorow.
It makes It a hole lot easy'er to respect eachother

The ending was sweet. Very simple, but not nothing too great.

Well I like it. I believe that you should live everyday like tomorrow is your last. It leaves things done in the end. You are scared that something might happen so you get everything out and the open. Very nice.

to be Honest ya kinda I've cheated death over three hundered times though I will never be Imortal.
two years ago I should of died of asspesnis poisoning but before that I was bit by a black widdow at work, but theres other ways I've nearly died.
but if i go into detail here
I'll get an Infraction for spaming what ever that means

Wow, kokoro, so the poem has history. Very interesting. I'm most happy for you that you managed to live through those experiences! Go You! I encourage you to write more! Very good poem.

Unusual poem in terms of structure.Though it is short,it is interesting.However,I wish there was more description and more flow in the words because i feel that is what the poem is lacking.But hey,it's not bad in quality.