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    Words to live by

    We can only live in the here and now, So leave no words unspoken,
    no laughter held back,
    don't leave others with
    one second chance.
    live in the MOMENT,
    earn your wings,
    and let your spirit
    FLY.

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    Re: Words to live by

    This is a very random poem, kokoro! Nice poem, nevertheless.. A little more description would be nice, maybe ^ ^ Good Job, tho

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    Re: Words to live by

    I'ts just the way I've lived my life till now. it basicly means to live like you'll die tomorow.
    It makes It a hole lot easy'er to respect eachother

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    Re: Words to live by

    The ending was sweet. Very simple, but not nothing too great.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: Words to live by

    Well I like it. I believe that you should live everyday like tomorrow is your last. It leaves things done in the end. You are scared that something might happen so you get everything out and the open. Very nice.
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    Re: Words to live by

    to be Honest ya kinda I've cheated death over three hundered times though I will never be Imortal.
    two years ago I should of died of asspesnis poisoning but before that I was bit by a black widdow at work, but theres other ways I've nearly died.

    but if i go into detail here
    I'll get an Infraction for spaming what ever that means

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    Re: Words to live by

    Wow, kokoro, so the poem has history. Very interesting. I'm most happy for you that you managed to live through those experiences! Go You! I encourage you to write more! Very good poem.

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    Re: Words to live by

    Unusual poem in terms of structure.Though it is short,it is interesting.However,I wish there was more description and more flow in the words because i feel that is what the poem is lacking.But hey,it's not bad in quality.

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