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    words from my heart~

    take me into your arms
    hold me close
    remind me of your sent
    never let me go

    forget all of your problems
    ignore your work for a bit
    stay with me a while
    we can make love together

    there's nothing i would rather do
    holding eacthother in our hearts
    we drown into eacthother
    Fly to places that have yet to be found

    It was news to me, more of a shock
    wasn't sure of waht to do
    never intended for this to happen
    i guess i have avoided it until now

    I may be able to live without you
    though i would never be complete
    Although the odds are against us
    there's noone else i would rather give my heart to

    these three words are used too often
    they come difficult to me
    when i say them i want you to know
    that they are coming from my once broken heart

    Promises i'll keep, cherish, and honor
    GIfts i will hold near and dear
    Love is what you'll always recive from me because...

    @}--I love you@}--

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    Re: words from my heart~

    *raises a double thumbs* great work again~! ^^ hopes~! it gives strenght~!
    ^^

    theres a few wrong spelling there... but it must be because u were in a hurry or some sort.. ^^

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    Re: words from my heart~

    yes i was in a hurry but... thanks for what you said it means alot to me... ^^

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    Re: words from my heart~

    very nice with the word
    keep them coming
    great job

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    Re: words from my heart~

    Ahh... such a sweet, sweet poem... so full of love... I love it!!! It's wonderful!!! A great work indeed!!!! I don't even know what more to say!!! I really enjoyed reading this and will be waiting for more!!!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: words from my heart~

    thanks but i don't know if my poems are the way i expected them to be anymore.. i mean i have been told that i have always had good poems but the fact that they are always revolved around love kinda makes me feel like you guys already know what's coming next ya know?

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