!Jamie5192

take me into your arms
hold me close
remind me of your sent
never let me go

forget all of your problems
ignore your work for a bit
stay with me a while
we can make love together

there's nothing i would rather do
holding eacthother in our hearts
we drown into eacthother
Fly to places that have yet to be found

It was news to me, more of a shock
wasn't sure of waht to do
never intended for this to happen
i guess i have avoided it until now

I may be able to live without you
though i would never be complete
Although the odds are against us
there's noone else i would rather give my heart to

these three words are used too often
they come difficult to me
when i say them i want you to know
that they are coming from my once broken heart

Promises i'll keep, cherish, and honor
GIfts i will hold near and dear
Love is what you'll always recive from me because...
@}--I love you@}--

RayMe

*raises a double thumbs* great work again~! ^^ hopes~! it gives strenght~!
^^

theres a few wrong spelling there... but it must be because u were in a hurry or some sort.. ^^

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!Jamie5192

yes i was in a hurry but... thanks for what you said it means alot to me... ^^

chrystalann2004

very nice with the word
keep them coming
great job

Lasura

Ahh... such a sweet, sweet poem... so full of love... I love it!!! It's wonderful!!! A great work indeed!!!! I don't even know what more to say!!! I really enjoyed reading this and will be waiting for more!!!

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My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

!Jamie5192

thanks but i don't know if my poems are the way i expected them to be anymore.. i mean i have been told that i have always had good poems but the fact that they are always revolved around love kinda makes me feel like you guys already know what's coming next ya know?