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    The Words Of A Vampire

    I shall become the ruler of darkness
    A soul that’s pure as the night
    And evil with the darkness that lies deep in my heart
    Stronger
    I shall become stronger
    The sounds in my thoughts continued to echo through my mind
    Power
    Power
    Give us more power
    Standing under the pure moon
    And the dark sky above me
    I see a beautiful scene
    A scene of my beautiful vengeance
    I still haven’t forgot that night
    I will not forget nor will I forgive
    Until I make that man regret
    I shall banish him into eternal
    Slow
    Deep
    And painful
    Suffering
    And I shall send him to the darkest pits of hell
    Although
    That hell would seem like heaven after I’m done with him
    I am blind with that desire
    I don’t see hate nor I see love
    I see only vengeance
    I shall make this earth hell
    Fear
    Fear
    Fear me
    I shall make every one fear me
    Know that
    Evil never forced me on everyone
    I forced evil on everything
    Suffer
    Bleed
    And die painfully
    More
    Give me more
    Show me more blood
    Until I am consumed by blood
    I shall make this world with no colors
    But I shall paint it all with blood
    No more will I hold mercy
    Upon those who disobey me
    And those who wish to resist me
    My love is here with me
    She will show me the way
    Until the sun comes
    And I as the moon shall rise every night
    By the pureness of my darkness
    And the justice of my evil
    Hear my words
    Hear the vows of a vampire
    And hear the vengeance from my heart
    You shall all suffer
    I shall torture you all
    As I have been tortured
    And as I have been suffering
    You shall all be banished into eternal pain and suffering
    And all of you shall die by my hands...............
    Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali
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    I Spread My Wings Without A trace

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    Re: The Words Of A Vampire

    powerxxx you are amazing loko! to come up with such peome you must have talent. Nice poem keep it up.

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    Re: The Words Of A Vampire

    i love the way you phrase your work. it is very "emotional" the way you interwove all the feelings he has into the poem. it is ver straight forward and i love it. can wait to see what you come up with next.
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    Re: The Words Of A Vampire

    ..."I shall make this earth hell
    Fear
    Fear
    Fear me
    I shall make every one fear me"...


    I love this part, its very powerful!!!

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    Re: The Words Of A Vampire

    coolness!!! you got talent!
    "... And then, a ray of light pierced the darkness. The light turned into a figure of a person who was followed by a fairy, and also held the spirit of the forest..."



    thats great!! thank you!!


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    Re: The Words Of A Vampire

    that is very intresting i always loved poetry


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    Re: The Words Of A Vampire

    Deep poem! The darkness draws you into it! Great job!

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