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Sep 03, 2006, 08:21 AM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere on this planet
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 Credits: 310 | The Words Of A Vampire I shall become the ruler of darkness A soul that’s pure as the night And evil with the darkness that lies deep in my heart Stronger I shall become stronger The sounds in my thoughts continued to echo through my mind Power Power Give us more power Standing under the pure moon And the dark sky above me I see a beautiful scene A scene of my beautiful vengeance I still haven’t forgot that night I will not forget nor will I forgive Until I make that man regret I shall banish him into eternal Slow Deep And painful Suffering And I shall send him to the darkest pits of hell Although That hell would seem like heaven after I’m done with him I am blind with that desire I don’t see hate nor I see love I see only vengeance I shall make this earth hell Fear Fear Fear me I shall make every one fear me Know that Evil never forced me on everyone I forced evil on everything Suffer Bleed And die painfully More Give me more Show me more blood Until I am consumed by blood I shall make this world with no colors But I shall paint it all with blood No more will I hold mercy Upon those who disobey me And those who wish to resist me My love is here with me She will show me the way Until the sun comes And I as the moon shall rise every night By the pureness of my darkness And the justice of my evil Hear my words Hear the vows of a vampire And hear the vengeance from my heart You shall all suffer I shall torture you all As I have been tortured And as I have been suffering You shall all be banished into eternal pain and suffering And all of you shall die by my hands...............
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Sep 08, 2006, 01:11 PM
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Credits: 2,946 | Re: The Words Of A Vampire i love the way you phrase your work. it is very "emotional" the way you interwove all the feelings he has into the poem. it is ver straight forward and i love it. can wait to see what you come up with next.
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Sep 08, 2006, 01:33 PM
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Credits: 9,335 | Re: The Words Of A Vampire ..."I shall make this earth hell Fear Fear Fear me I shall make every one fear me"... I love this part, its very powerful!!!  
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Sep 08, 2006, 01:40 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: look under a man hole cover!!
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Credits: 160 | Re: The Words Of A Vampire coolness!!! you got talent!
__________________ "... And then, a ray of light pierced the darkness. The light turned into a figure of a person who was followed by a fairy, and also held the spirit of the forest..."  thats great!! thank you!!   |
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Sep 08, 2006, 01:47 PM
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Credits: 1,660 | Re: The Words Of A Vampire that is very intresting i always loved poetry
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Sep 08, 2006, 10:17 PM
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Credits: 1,176 | Re: The Words Of A Vampire Deep poem! The darkness draws you into it! Great job! BlueFox1 |
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