powerxxx

you think your smart
your not

it's plain fantasy
that you want me to fall

it's killing me
that you got it all

the jury
is coming to judge you
instead of me

so what you got
one last shot

it seems to me
you won't need it

because you've already got a goal

me and myself see hell
through eyes that do not lie

there is nothing here left
for me to collect

why don't you fall out
so i can fill out
the space i left

in this world there is nothing for me
no place for me

and you
only make things,,,,,
more worse and horrible

i am stuck in this world
nothing waiting for me

i am stuck in this world
lonely and fading

nothing for me
no hate nor love

nothing,,,,
there is pure nothingness around me,,,,,,,,,,,

in this world
i am alone
dying
and fading

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Kasai

Nice breaks, now elaborate. And you can combine two stanzas to make a four verse stanza. That would be more pleasing to the eye.

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ketaro

awesome poem man, although when you read it it sounds more like a song, but still pretty good, keep it up man.