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    The World As It Is!

    There was a time when trust
    was everywhere and smiles
    could be seen all day long
    and a rainbow was for luck.

    There was a time when love
    was a good thing hate was a word
    used on inanimate object's that
    were ugly and poorly made.

    Everything pass'es with a blur
    now the trust is gone the love
    is rare and the hate is strong
    no matter what you do.

    A closed door with weaping
    and unheard cry's of pain
    needing someone to
    hear it no matter what.

    A heart grown cold of what
    used to be friendship, now is
    just a vessle for pain and hate
    love is used in ill manner.

    Nothing makes the world i know
    cringe anymore everything is fine
    something is right with the world
    today and everyone knows it's wrong.

    So as i sit here looking at the
    world i become blind to what is
    real and accept what everyone
    calles love,truth,and freindship.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The World As It Is!

    hey chris, cool poem as usual ^^
    i don't know why, but i liked this part ..

    Everything pass'es with a blur
    now the trust is gone the love
    is rare and the hate is strong




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    Re: The World As It Is!

    thanks im glad you liked it and that verse right there was retty awesome
    and glad you liked it also
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The World As It Is!

    hey, boss good poem, liked it very much. hahaha we can use this aginst the compition.

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    Re: The World As It Is!

    I like this poem by you also Chris
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    Re: The World As It Is!

    its a good one hu. he should get a prise. lol

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    Re: The World As It Is!

    thanks im glad everyone liked it i made it a for a very close
    freind becuase of something i was told happend to her.
    and i hope she will be better soon
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The World As It Is!

    ooooh. sorry to here that boss. i hope she gets better.

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