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    Unhappy a world of glass


    a world of glass
    fraigile and free
    so easy to see
    so easy to envy



    a world of glass
    cracking under the strain
    of years of neglect
    anger and pain



    a world of glass
    shattered and felled
    shards of a life
    trying to rebuild



    a world of glass
    built up anew
    shards of a old
    embeded in the new
    When you walk away
    You don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go
    Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go

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    Re: a world of glass

    This is a good poem keep up the good work.

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    Re: a world of glass

    Wow, I missed these types of poems ^_^ Cool
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    Re: a world of glass

    Awesome job and realistic too

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    Re: a world of glass

    hmmm.... I think the poem has a good beat to it. Its def something u can get into. However, personally I found it difficult 2 interpret. I thought maybe it was metaphorical for society or some part of life.... but thats just me.
    Overall, its pretty good.
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    Re: a world of glass

    Hmm........

    Quote Originally Posted by Kasai
    I want my readers to interpret the poem in anyway they would like.
    As Kasai said (and Chief as well) poems are meant to be interpreted by the reader in any way they please ^_^ Poems are free, let your imagination run wild
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    Re: a world of glass

    It's one of them poem, where I have to read twice before I was able to see the meaning or at the least, some of it. Well written! Few words, but vast meaning. Keep up the awesome work. ^_^

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    Re: a world of glass

    wow this one is the koolest poem that i have read so far. (^_^).

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