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Reply With QuoteThis is a good poem keep up the good work.
a world of glass
a world of glass
fraigile and free
so easy to see
so easy to envy
a world of glass
cracking under the strain
of years of neglect
anger and pain
a world of glass
shattered and felled
shards of a life
trying to rebuild
a world of glass
built up anew
shards of a old
embeded in the new
When you walk away
You don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go
Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go
This is a good poem keep up the good work.
Wow, I missed these types of poems ^_^ Cool
Awesome job and realistic too
hmmm.... I think the poem has a good beat to it. Its def something u can get into. However, personally I found it difficult 2 interpret. I thought maybe it was metaphorical for society or some part of life.... but thats just me.
Overall, its pretty good.
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Hmm........
As Kasai said (and Chief as well) poems are meant to be interpreted by the reader in any way they please ^_^ Poems are free, let your imagination run wildOriginally Posted by Kasai
It's one of them poem, where I have to read twice before I was able to see the meaning or at the least, some of it. Well written! Few words, but vast meaning. Keep up the awesome work. ^_^
wow this one is the koolest poem that i have read so far. (^_^).
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