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Dec 15, 2006, 02:52 PM
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 Credits: 212 | A World of Glass A world of glass Fragile and free So easy to see So easy to envy A world of glass Cracking under the strain Of years of neglect Anger and pain A world of glass Shattered and fall in Shards of a life Trying to rebuild A world of glass Built up anew Shards of a old Embedded in the new
__________________  When you walk awayYou don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go |
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Dec 18, 2006, 02:36 AM
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Credits: 1,490 | Re: A World of Glass My goodness, this was an okay poem. The flow was pretty and the rhyming gave it a nice little ring. Good job. The only thing "wrong" with it would be that the wording in the thid stanza has a little grammatical error.
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