powerxxx

Open these gates to a world

A world built by the sun
A world held by the moon
A world directed by ideas and thoughts

A world built to fly
Up high in the sky

A world built to help those to fly free
High above a sacred tree

A world that grows
And a world that holds
The feelings of those
Who saw it's sun and moon

Those who were abandoned
For their ideas and thoughts

Came here to find
Someone that listens

To find a friend
To find someone and live there without any tears
All the years

To hold a smile
Through their lives

A world built
To find a home
To find a place
Tnd to find a loved one

This is a world
Built by those who see with their hearts
Built by those who feel with their souls

A world that was built
By....Noone.......
But..........
Us
A world just for us...

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creamsilver

lovely poem gives a really good image in your head, it sounds really sad though. I like it please keep writing

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Dark_Ichigo_X

good poem i like it. keep it up mabey u need to join the poem caln

ketaro

Dang man, you write thye koolest peoms in this section. Keep it up man.

Reaper66

pretty good you really do have good poems
sounds like a nice world by the way
keep it up

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