+ Reply to Thread
Results 1 to 5 of 5

Thread: A World Just For Us

  1. #1
    Otaku powerxxx may be famous one day powerxxx may be famous one day powerxxx's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2006
    Location
    somewhere on this planet
    Posts
    131
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    A World Just For Us

    Open these gates to a world

    A world built by the sun
    A world held by the moon
    A world directed by ideas and thoughts

    A world built to fly
    Up high in the sky

    A world built to help those to fly free
    High above a sacred tree

    A world that grows
    And a world that holds
    The feelings of those
    Who saw it's sun and moon

    Those who were abandoned
    For their ideas and thoughts

    Came here to find
    Someone that listens

    To find a friend
    To find someone and live there without any tears
    All the years

    To hold a smile
    Through their lives

    A world built
    To find a home
    To find a place
    Tnd to find a loved one

    This is a world
    Built by those who see with their hearts
    Built by those who feel with their souls

    A world that was built
    By....Noone.......
    But..........
    Us
    A world just for us...
    Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali
    I Fly Swiftly through the air
    I Spread My Wings Without A trace

  2. #2
    Newbie creamsilver may be famous one day creamsilver may be famous one day creamsilver's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2006
    Location
    Korea
    Posts
    22
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: A World Just For Us

    lovely poem gives a really good image in your head, it sounds really sad though. I like it please keep writing

    If you try and fly to your goal you will only fall from the starry sky

  3. #3
    Otaku Dark_Ichigo_X may be famous one day Dark_Ichigo_X may be famous one day Dark_Ichigo_X's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2006
    Location
    section 9
    Posts
    200
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: A World Just For Us

    good poem i like it. keep it up mabey u need to join the poem caln

  4. #4
    You's Trollin Pro Leafblower Champion, Helicopter Champion ketaro is making a name for themselves ketaro is making a name for themselves ketaro's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2005
    Posts
    4,293
    Thanks
    30
    Thanked 38 Times in 36 Posts

    Re: A World Just For Us

    Dang man, you write thye koolest peoms in this section. Keep it up man.

  5. #5
    Otaku Reaper66 may be famous one day Reaper66 may be famous one day Reaper66's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2006
    Location
    in the ally taggin ur buildings
    Posts
    285
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: A World Just For Us

    pretty good you really do have good poems
    sounds like a nice world by the way
    keep it up
    (-)4(|< 7(-)3 P14|\|37

+ Reply to Thread

Similar Threads

  1. Watching The World
    By Lost_Love in forum Poems
    Replies: 7
    Last Post: Jul 31, 2006, 02:09 PM
  2. in this world
    By powerxxx in forum Poems
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: Jul 28, 2006, 07:22 PM
  3. another world
    By lord nikon in forum The Thread Vault
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: Apr 08, 2005, 10:24 PM
  4. What Anime/Game world would you live in
    By False Truth in forum The Thread Vault
    Replies: 42
    Last Post: Jan 13, 2005, 02:44 PM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts