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Reply With QuoteGood poem. I love the last stanza.
Sometimes I've felt like my heart should be as cold as the world is to me. Good write, as usual. Keep it up!Originally Posted by flaminghate
My life is like sorrow,
Empty and vage,
I feel like this.
Day after day,
And no one understands,
My thoughts inside.
And sometimes I wish I just could die,
The world never saw me,
As a normal person.
The only thing it sees is a dead body,
Not moving or living,
Just standing there.
As well as other people,
You are aware,
The world is cold.
Empty and dark,
I knew this right from the start,
The world is black just as my heart...
Good poem. I love the last stanza.
Sometimes I've felt like my heart should be as cold as the world is to me. Good write, as usual. Keep it up!
Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.
zomg!
How can you create so much?!
Wow, you really must be on a roll
Which is totally awesome!
-^_^-
GOOD JOB!
Very good poem. It sounded like a poem about someone who feels so alone that if they dissapeared none would miss them. Good job and I'm sure your next one will be good too.
"Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
Thanks so much I love it!
y'know, I really like your work- ALOT. I feel like I can relate... even if you don't believe me.
... Not Ever Again...
I guess most of us can relate to this.. It's a poem well done with feelings of sadness that one has put in~ NicE onE!
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