Oo. Ominous or however you spell that crap. I really like this a lot. I am feeling rather cheerful so it was odd that I liked it at the moment. Cus...it's I donnol. It's something. Lol. Creepy I guess?
It's the end of the world,
and I've got one thing to ask:
Do you regret anything that
you did in your past?
It's the conclusion of time,
and there's nothing left to say.
I've repeated the same answers
every single day.
It's the end of days,
and the crowd goes wild!
How many grown ups have
the mind-frame of a child?
It's the end of the world.
No more wondering what will be.
When the clock reaches zero,
I'm the last thing you'll see.
Oo. Ominous or however you spell that crap. I really like this a lot. I am feeling rather cheerful so it was odd that I liked it at the moment. Cus...it's I donnol. It's something. Lol. Creepy I guess?
Wow!!! I like it very much, especially the last line!!!! Wonderful!!! Thank You by the way!!! Thank You so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is just the thing I searched for a story!!!!! Now I know how to write it!!!! ^^ great!!! Thank You!
And I hope you've posted more while I was gone... I've really missed your poems ^^
wow that was the best poem i have ver read and i mean that honestly i have only one problem why the **** is it only you why cant i fight you or something for it lol
Hey, thanks for the comment! ^_^ I appreciate it. I'm glad you liked it so much. I had been kind of in a writing slump before I wrote this one, so I didn't think people would like it. Come to think of it, it was ignored for the first few days after posting. (I bet people were like, "Here we go. Sprout's gonna write some s*** that's gonna get him banned." LOL.)
Thanks again, and I hope you like my future writings.
lol ya well i always liked your poems i just wasnt on when you posted it i had just figured out it was on here and i replied quickly
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