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    The World's Is Numb To Me!

    In life you can only be certain
    of pain and loss , your friends
    will move on and you will never
    know peace of mind.

    To never trust its what life
    always offers , doubt and
    insacurity are your rewards
    dont worry you not alone.

    Why do i only see the sad and
    defeated way?, there are so many
    reasons why you can name a few
    and would be right.

    Where once was light only darkness stays,
    those tears you cry are like falling rain ,
    sadness is your only comfort , the numbness
    of your heart protects you from the lies.

    where once was love only hate remains , it falls like
    a crumbling building , dont say good bye and dont
    say you even tried because you you left me alone
    against a world that is ruthless.

    For all the lies you told , the hurt and the pain , no
    loyal friend was ever there for me , i was left alone and
    a trust was lost and will never be found , you cant say
    i didnt try , its to late now.

    The tears you cry for me , the hope and desire
    for a better day there is nothing left for moe , so
    i will be what i will be what i will be and i say you
    didnt even try ,take back the lies , the hurt and the blame.

    I am lost and i can never go home again , where i lay my
    head now is my home , if only the world was different but
    it isnt , if only love was there but it want aproach me , if
    freinds could be made , they only fear and hate what they
    have created.
    __________________________________________________ _
    this poem is about how the real world can treat you
    and leave you feeling lost and on your own , which is
    true from a certain perspective but in the end it isnt
    who you know or how you live , its how you see the world
    and how you let things get to you.

    comments and sugestions are welcomed
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The World's Is Numb To Me!

    yeah... Im all too familiar with that numb feeling the world can plague your soul with. Infact, Ive gone beyond numb... I hated numb so much that I moved on to the next chapter... Seeking pain. The poem mentioned pain and loss as being the only things you can be sure of... and if you believe that (which I have) then... you go numb to STOP feeling pain. Then... you start to get comfortable in the numbness... And it frightens you, because you start to miss what it was like to FEEL. So.. instead of running.. you seek pain. Because its better to feel pain than nothing. (at least thats how I've rationalized it)
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: The World's Is Numb To Me!

    wow another amazing poem from you i love this as i love all your poems keep em coming



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    Re: The World's Is Numb To Me!

    Well I love This one Mabye because It's belong to me in many way ...*sigh*
    but It's was a great wonderful job..Hope to see more from this Poem..

    Foolish beating

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