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    ??*Everyone Here Hates Me??* Zackraa may be famous one day Zackraa may be famous one day Zackraa's Avatar
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    Worn away

    standing in the woods alone
    no place to call my own
    from my eyes I cry
    like blood raining from the sky

    my wrists are torn
    my soul is worn
    I see everything rotten
    but these are forgotten

    they say there are people who care
    but they were really never there
    I watch the world crumble
    beneath me it breaks as I stumble

    the ground tries to swallow
    on the inside I feel hollow
    the earth wants to eat me
    but I cant let it beat me

    I can still stand tall
    inside myself I fall
    I'm faking every smile
    making my life worth your while

    I'm slowly fading away
    you really shouldnt pray
    but me I'm wasted time
    I'm as sad as this rhyme

    trying to push you far away from me
    my eyes hurt from crying I cant see
    this corner seems like a great place to hide
    I love, I cry and unlike you at least I tried


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    Re: Worn away

    I really love this poem. It was very well written, and I really like your choice of words.

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    Re: Worn away

    I normally don't comment on others works cause there are so few that are well written and that really speak to me...yours has done both...awesome work Zackraa...so much so that this makes me want to write something up myself!


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