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Worn away
standing in the woods alone
no place to call my own
from my eyes I cry
like blood raining from the sky
my wrists are torn
my soul is worn
I see everything rotten
but these are forgotten
they say there are people who care
but they were really never there
I watch the world crumble
beneath me it breaks as I stumble
the ground tries to swallow
on the inside I feel hollow
the earth wants to eat me
but I cant let it beat me
I can still stand tall
inside myself I fall
I'm faking every smile
making my life worth your while
I'm slowly fading away
you really shouldnt pray
but me I'm wasted time
I'm as sad as this rhyme
trying to push you far away from me
my eyes hurt from crying I cant see
this corner seems like a great place to hide
I love, I cry and unlike you at least I tried
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Re: Worn away
I really love this poem. It was very well written, and I really like your choice of words.
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Re: Worn away
I normally don't comment on others works cause there are so few that are well written and that really speak to me...yours has done both...awesome work Zackraa...so much so that this makes me want to write something up myself!
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