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    worries of a heart

    this poem is what i feel right now since someone special to me hasnt been communicating and i am kind of worried. so yeah i hope u get the meaning since its written in a wierd from lol.

    today the day is cold once more
    here out side waiting for you,
    how long will you have me wait
    it has been long since i heard from you,
    i dont know how well you are or
    if you need someone, there hasnt been
    a reply to my letters nor to my calls,
    how cold i am with out my life seems
    useless with out you, faith keeps me
    here waiting, if becoming an angel is
    what must be to see you to
    look after you i shall become one
    yet once there i wont be able to hold you,
    if i could only grow wings...if i could hear you
    i would live once more to know that you are ok
    even if is with some one else.
    death is not a final goodbey...but...a see you later.
    by me ^_^.



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    Re: worries of a heart

    gee this poem is pretty sad hope this isnt about you bro if it is more power to you but this is really good i must say il try to get some of my work posted i only write poems when im depressed however.
    ..:Open Your Wings Evil Angel:..

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    Re: worries of a heart

    well this is kind of true on whats goign on but life changes fast. i think we all tend to write poems when we are down but its ok i gess its hurts not knowing how the person u love is. its harder when u know u cant be.
    death is not a final goodbey...but...a see you later.
    by me ^_^.



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    Re: worries of a heart

    this is a very sad poem strong emotions!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! feel better
    Last edited by babepooh15; Dec 07, 2006 at 11:09 AM.
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