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    The worst crime ever.

    Looking back. I knew.
    I had no chance.
    But, the music was playing.
    I had to dance.

    I could've guessed.
    To him, our dance had no meaning.
    And that hurt me at first.
    My soul was left screaming!

    "Why do I feel unworthy,
    Because I didn't break his heart?
    I must've gone unoticed,
    When I didn't rip his world appart.

    I must've meant nothing.
    Because I wasn't worth a fight."

    I tell myself these things alot.
    But now I see its not right.

    Because I'm not unloveable.
    Infact its quite the contrary.
    And I will be the woman,
    Some lucky man gets to marry.

    I've cried. I've shivered.
    Kicked myself for the last time.
    If he don't love me... Thats life.
    To not love myself... Is a crime.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: The worst crime ever.

    That was very good and the part that you said "To not love myself...Is a crime" that is completely true...for you have to love yourself before you can love others...I believe don't quote me on that...but nice poem keep up the good work!!

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    Re: The worst crime ever.

    Quote Originally Posted by tora_tora_yatta View Post
    That was very good and the part that you said "To not love myself...Is a crime" that is completely true...for you have to love yourself before you can love others...I believe don't quote me on that...:
    Yeah... Its hard not to internalize it when someone seems to not see your worth. It always seems like that one person who doesn't value you, is the one you wish would value you most... See me, Im starting to focus on those who DO value me... and Im also learning to value myself despite what anyone else may think.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: The worst crime ever.

    Yay!!!!!!! I feel like jumping around and screaming "That's the way to go girl!!!" This is a great poem- a lill bit of sad at the start, I could really imagine myself at a party thinking the same things, but the conclusion you come to here, is so optimistic- you show yourself so strong, that it makes me just feel... proud. lol ^^

    And the last line is just per-fect!!!!!!!! Love it!!! Nice work!

    I really liked this poem, good work Peach!!!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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