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    Is It wrong..!!

    Is it wrong to love a person that's with someone else...
    Is it wrong to long for a person that's not yours...
    Is it wrong to reach out a hand for the person you love while you know he won't take it cause that hand belongs to someone else...
    Is it wrong to feel your heart ache for that person while you are trying to date with another one...
    Is it wrong that you cry because that person is with another person...
    Is it wrong that you still keep dreaming of that person while you don't know if that person dreams about you...
    Is it wrong to talk to the person that maybe want to go on with it's life and don't want to talk you...
    Is it wrong that you become happy when you think about that person even if you know he is happy with another person and then acts happy...
    Is it wrong you can't go with your life on without that person while you know it's over...
    Is it wrong that you know from the depth of your heart you don't want to go on with your life without that person...
    Is it wrong that you still hope that you two will be together once and be happy...


    This is a poem that I somehow had to write...
    It wanted to get out...
    I don't know why but it sets me to think...
    Well I hope you like it to read..


    We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...

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    Re: Is It wrong..!!

    hey nice poem and how are you feeling ummmmmmm....... i have been thinking alot and well lets talk about it sometime please
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: Is It wrong..!!

    omg that is so sad
    but i liked it
    it was deep
    and man it takes courage to watch the one to love be with someone else.
    Good poem.

    ^.^
    ~Servatis a periculum.
    Servatis a maleficum~

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    Re: Is It wrong..!!

    I can relate to where your comming from. Great job exspressing your emotion.
    I think I've known you all along.
    I just lost your face in the crowed for a while.
    I think I've been holding my breath all my life, until you found me here tonight.
    So ask me now and I'll run away with you.

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    Thats realy from the heart....... is it? Wow amazing.
    Martin Z

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    Re: Is It wrong..!!

    i can feel the emotion flowing through and i love the art that accompanied it... it also serves as a synopsis to the poem... it's great... ^^,
    i'll choose to love whoever i wish to love and nobody can stop me from doing so ----

    crimson
    edited from SamBakZa.net

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    Thank you for all your reply's...^_^...
    I'm glad you all liked it..
    And yes Martin Z..
    It is from the depth of my heart...
    We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...

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