LinkBack URL
About LinkBacks
Reply With Quotegood................but if that was ur first happy one...........how sad are th others?
+wrong way to heaven+ the wrong way to heaven
Some people no the choices they make.
the lives they lead
the roads they take.
they go left
when thay should go right.
they turn away
from gods guiding light.
they don't reach out
and grab his helping hand.
they hesitate.
so, alone they stand
or at least they think.
he's watching over them
day and night
hopeing on the day they get it right.
till then, how he sees it
they'er walking the wrong way
to heaven.
my first happy one
good................but if that was ur first happy one...........how sad are th others?
I think you ment Know,Some people no the choices they make.
Dispite the correction, I thought this was a weel put together poem,
I do look forward how you are going to put your next work together!
Keep it up!!
my other ones r pritty depresing just look
that's awesome, i like this line!Originally Posted by just_an_awful_dream
definetly your best one yet (at least that i've seen)
You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.
Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!
Wow did someone inspire this poem? I think it is really great!!!!For real...I suport your Poems all the way!!!!!!! good or bad
Posting Permissions
Bookmarks