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    Wrong for you!

    Its been a while since i could
    say i hate you and i mean it,
    the day's have been long and all
    i can see is you and that makes
    me so damn angry.

    As i stand hear looking at him
    and the pain he causes all i see
    is you tearing up and running away,
    just don't run to the edge where life
    fades away.


    The hate i have for him with how
    he seems to know what to say to keep
    you sickens me ,but his lies and the way
    he keeps you prisoner will be over soon, i will
    fight him till he goes away so your pain will
    go away.

    Life for you has been dark till i came along
    the pain and guilt and sorrow you felt before
    will all go away as i make memories of him fade away
    becuase his love you dont need becuase it drowns you
    in sorrow,the days almost done and so is he .

    Life with him is hard for you and i will make him
    go away when i take your hand.....

    this poem isnt all about love and it isnt all about
    how love is truly wrong for some its about life
    and how when somone loves another and they meet yet
    one more person this new love can be so grand the first
    love can be bad which i it could be. comments abnd sugestions are welcomed
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Wrong for you!

    This poem was very good. I can feel how you feel and I thought it flowed wonderfully. The words were all right together and you just did a very nice job. I can't wait to read more.
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    Re: Wrong for you!

    i love this poem maybe you can teach me how to right a good poem someday.!

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    Re: Wrong for you!

    That is a very sweet poem. It sounds like something someone could read in a wedding. I really liked it and can't wait to read more.
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    Re: Wrong for you!

    Thy spelling level increases*final fantasy victory music cues up*!! Seriously, it seems like you carry a great jealousy towards the man that is between you and the apple of your eye...........
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