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Nov 27, 2006, 08:50 AM
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 King Of Darkness  Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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 | Wrong for you! Its been a while since i could say i hate you and i mean it, the day's have been long and all i can see is you and that makes me so damn angry. As i stand hear looking at him and the pain he causes all i see is you tearing up and running away, just don't run to the edge where life fades away. The hate i have for him with how he seems to know what to say to keep you sickens me ,but his lies and the way he keeps you prisoner will be over soon, i will fight him till he goes away so your pain will go away. Life for you has been dark till i came along the pain and guilt and sorrow you felt before will all go away as i make memories of him fade away becuase his love you dont need becuase it drowns you in sorrow,the days almost done and so is he . Life with him is hard for you and i will make him go away when i take your hand..... this poem isnt all about love and it isnt all about how love is truly wrong for some its about life and how when somone loves another and they meet yet one more person this new love can be so grand the first love can be bad which i it could be. comments abnd sugestions are welcomed
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Nov 27, 2006, 03:47 PM
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| Re: Wrong for you! This poem was very good. I can feel how you feel and I thought it flowed wonderfully. The words were all right together and you just did a very nice job. I can't wait to read more.
__________________  A white rose no longer alone I know who's heart it is to represent I didn't pick it, but i let it grow For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums |
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Nov 28, 2006, 10:14 PM
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 Heavy Metal Goddess  Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun
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| Re: Wrong for you! That is a very sweet poem. It sounds like something someone could read in a wedding. I really liked it and can't wait to read more.
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Nov 28, 2006, 10:21 PM
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| Lord Of The Weirdness  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Just swimming in the Ether....
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| Re: Wrong for you! Thy spelling level increases*final fantasy victory music cues up*!! Seriously, it seems like you carry a great jealousy towards the man that is between you and the apple of your eye...........
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