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| Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In My own heart
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![]() ![]() Credits: 697 | yay y have u hurt me caused me so much pain y have u hurt me my heart u have slain y have u saddened me and broken my soul and now look at me with eyes like coal y have i fell for it its a well known trap the way you left me i felt liked id been slapped y did i love u a dummy on my end. now im sitting looking stupid with only my friends neveragain will i be hurt its been the toughest lesson ive ever had to learn but now its over and im relived you were just a bad seed
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Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2006 Location: Streets of Compton,
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![]() ![]() Credits: 506 | Re: yay Despite all the gramatic errors it was a nice poem! I didnt understand what this line quite ment after carefully rereading it. Quote:
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Elie Jelly Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Hell is an understatement
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,051 | Re: yay Quote:
she doesnt know how and why she loved a jerk like him...i think...not sure XD question- why is the title- yay?? lol....and it's a sad poem i like it, but there are some parts that didnt really had a flow, like it was forced and all...but it's a great work ^^ 7/10
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