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Reply With Quoteumm! this poem is really kool, are you in pain or something? keep it up.
y have u hurt me
caused me so much pain
y have u hurt me
my heart u have slain
y have u saddened me
and broken my soul
and now look at me with
eyes like coal
y have i fell for it
its a well known trap
the way you left me i
felt liked id been slapped
y did i love u a dummy on
my end.
now im sitting looking stupid
with only my friends
neveragain will i be hurt
its been the toughest lesson
ive ever had to learn
but now its over and im
relived
you were just a bad seed
HolderOfTheDarkChalice's LiL sis
umm! this poem is really kool, are you in pain or something? keep it up.
no im relived that im single finally
HolderOfTheDarkChalice's LiL sis
Despite all the gramatic errors it was a nice poem!
I didnt understand what this line quite ment after carefully rereading it.
If you could please let me know!y did i love u a dummy on!
i think it meant thatOriginally Posted by The Fighter
Despite all the gramatic errors it was a nice poem!
I didnt understand what this line quite ment after carefully rereading it.
If you could please let me know!
she doesnt know how and why she loved a jerk like him...i think...not sure XD question- why is the title- yay?? lol....and it's a sad poem
i like it, but there are some parts that didnt really had a flow, like it was forced and all...but it's a great work ^^ 7/10
well i ment 4 it to be y but sumhow it said yay
HolderOfTheDarkChalice's LiL sis
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