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    yay

    y have u hurt me
    caused me so much pain

    y have u hurt me
    my heart u have slain

    y have u saddened me
    and broken my soul
    and now look at me with
    eyes like coal

    y have i fell for it
    its a well known trap
    the way you left me i
    felt liked id been slapped

    y did i love u a dummy on
    my end.
    now im sitting looking stupid
    with only my friends

    neveragain will i be hurt
    its been the toughest lesson
    ive ever had to learn
    but now its over and im
    relived
    you were just a bad seed

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    Re: yay

    umm! this poem is really kool, are you in pain or something? keep it up.

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    Re: yay

    no im relived that im single finally

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    Re: yay

    Despite all the gramatic errors it was a nice poem!
    I didnt understand what this line quite ment after carefully rereading it.

    y did i love u a dummy on
    If you could please let me know! !

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    Re: yay

    Quote Originally Posted by The Fighter
    Despite all the gramatic errors it was a nice poem!
    I didnt understand what this line quite ment after carefully rereading it.


    If you could please let me know! !
    i think it meant that
    she doesnt know how and why she loved a jerk like him...i think...not sure XD question- why is the title- yay?? lol....and it's a sad poem
    i like it, but there are some parts that didnt really had a flow, like it was forced and all...but it's a great work ^^ 7/10

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    Re: yay

    well i ment 4 it to be y but sumhow it said yay

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