tupacs_wifey

y have u hurt me
caused me so much pain

y have u hurt me
my heart u have slain

y have u saddened me
and broken my soul
and now look at me with
eyes like coal

y have i fell for it
its a well known trap
the way you left me i
felt liked id been slapped

y did i love u a dummy on
my end.
now im sitting looking stupid
with only my friends

neveragain will i be hurt
its been the toughest lesson
ive ever had to learn
but now its over and im
relived
you were just a bad seed

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ketaro

umm! this poem is really kool, are you in pain or something? keep it up.

tupacs_wifey

no im relived that im single finally

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The Fighter

Despite all the gramatic errors it was a nice poem!
I didnt understand what this line quite ment after carefully rereading it.

If you could please let me know! !

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elie26

i think it meant that
she doesnt know how and why she loved a jerk like him...i think...not sure XD question- why is the title- yay?? lol....and it's a sad poem
i like it, but there are some parts that didnt really had a flow, like it was forced and all...but it's a great work ^^ 7/10

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tupacs_wifey

well i ment 4 it to be y but sumhow it said yay

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