Sashacat

I still can't believe it's true
I'm finally with you
It's always been a struggle
Finding the right time
Now it's a matter of forever
We could stay together
When did this happen
When did we meet
Everything's just a blur
You're my boy I choose
You're the friend I hope I never lose
Because of you I've grown
It may not be love
but you've shown me heart
I was once scared and hurt
Now you've dusted me off
I'm ready to stand again
I know it's cheesy
but I owe it all to you

Immortal Warrior

Wow, besides the part about being a nerd, which REALLY threw me off, that was amazing. I'd have to say get rid of that line;
And it'd be totally awesome in my eyes. I know exactly where that's all coming from, and I know how you feel when you write something like that. It's a beautiful feeling knowing someone out there is thinking about you isn't it. It may not rhyme, and it may not be wordy, but it's straight and simple. Very very good. I hope to see more works from you in the future.

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Red_Wings

Yeah! Woot. Woot, as my friends at school would say.

Sorry, but when I read the part about them being your boo, I kinda cracked up.

It's probably because at my school we don't refer to people as being ours or anyone else's boo..

Other than that, sorry for critisizing. I can't stand it when people do it.

Guess I'm a hypocrite. But other than all of that, sweet buns on the poem!

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Sashacat

Haha, I guess you have to be from the ghetto to kinda enjoy that word. S'all good.