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Old Jul 02, 2006, 07:25 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I still can't believe it's true
I'm finally with you
It's always been a struggle
Finding the right time
Now it's a matter of forever
We could stay together
When did this happen
When did we meet
Everything's just a blur
You're my boy I choose
You're the friend I hope I never lose
Because of you I've grown
It may not be love
but you've shown me heart
I was once scared and hurt
Now you've dusted me off
I'm ready to stand again
I know it's cheesy
but I owe it all to you

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Old Jul 03, 2006, 10:04 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Wow, besides the part about being a nerd, which REALLY threw me off, that was amazing. I'd have to say get rid of that line;
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I recall thinking you a nerd
Now you've proved me wrong
It's something quite common
And it'd be totally awesome in my eyes. I know exactly where that's all coming from, and I know how you feel when you write something like that. It's a beautiful feeling knowing someone out there is thinking about you isn't it. It may not rhyme, and it may not be wordy, but it's straight and simple. Very very good. I hope to see more works from you in the future.
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Old Jul 03, 2006, 10:21 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Yeah! Woot. Woot, as my friends at school would say.

Sorry, but when I read the part about them being your boo, I kinda cracked up.

It's probably because at my school we don't refer to people as being ours or anyone else's boo..

Other than that, sorry for critisizing. I can't stand it when people do it.

Guess I'm a hypocrite. But other than all of that, sweet buns on the poem!
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Old Jul 03, 2006, 12:32 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Yeah! Woot. Woot, as my friends at school would say.

Sorry, but when I read the part about them being your boo, I kinda cracked up.

It's probably because at my school we don't refer to people as being ours or anyone else's boo..

Other than that, sorry for critisizing. I can't stand it when people do it.

Guess I'm a hypocrite. But other than all of that, sweet buns on the poem!


Haha, I guess you have to be from the ghetto to kinda enjoy that word. S'all good.
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