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    Re: You!

    Awesome poem with a deep meaning, keep it up!

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    thanks im glad you liked it and i will try
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    .... i wonder, what had you see until you made this poetry...
    but, i was a good poetry.
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    I liked it, man. That was really cool how you did that. It was different which is nice, and I always liked the poems that asked questions because they get you interested more and make you think. I thought you did a very nice job, keep it up!
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    thanks im glad everyone liked this it was difretn but i was going for the read not just my self in ths one but thankl you
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    feels like pain running down on bad blood and haunt taint, though its pretty good
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    Wow! This was sooooooooo awesome big bro! I loved it! This really makes you think,does anyone really care about you or your feelings. Or if anyone will care once your gone from this world forever.It's such a sad thing 2 think about,but yet you can't help but ask yourself these questions sometimes.I just loved the emotion that you put into it.Awesome job as always big bro! Can't wait 2 see what's next.
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    Re: You!

    I love it! it has depth and meaning to it! *Hands you a coookie~ Job well done!
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