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    You

    You were the person I liked the most
    I thought u were the kind of person I needed, u were my dose
    Of happiness and joy I was sure
    You had a kind heart and were willing to give me something pure
    And show me that there were nice people in the world
    I never thought you would hurl
    My love for you away
    Like some kind of pathetic game
    That you had won leaving the other person in the dust
    You were something I had once lusted
    Were u aware of what u had just done?
    Or was it all just for fun
    So as I sat on the bus ride home I knew just what to do
    If I couldnt have you
    Why would I even bother to wake up every day?
    And not just lay
    There in my bed
    I was sure I would be better off dead
    To u I was nothing
    To me u were something
    Something I wanted so much
    But something I could never touch.
    So as I sat there on my bed
    Knowing I would be better of dead
    I got in and laded
    Down knowing thats where I would stay
    For the rest of my life
    Soon to be ended by a knife
    I took the razor and dug it in
    As the blood ran down me and into my white sheets I realized my sin
    I was taking my own life just because of the words you had once said
    All because of them I was on my way to being dead
    As the phone rang I picked it up
    And all I could here was u say sup
    I stayed calm even though by now I was in pain
    I asked u why u had called and u wanted help on ur main
    Project that was due this up coming Monday
    I told u I was to busy and to ask me another day
    By now I was in a pool
    Of my own blood, was I just some tool?
    That u could use over and over again till I was dead
    You asked me if u could come over this week as I went to speak
    I realized nothing was coming out of my mouth, I was too weak
    To say anything, I never notice just how deep
    I had made the cut, now laying there in a bloody heap.
    By now u were getting scared that there was no answer only sobs
    You hung up the phone and started to jog
    Down the street to my house
    As you came in you were quite like a mouse,
    U crept to my room, up the 13 stairs
    As u walked into my room and saw the tear
    In my wrist u stared to cry
    As u ran up to my bed telling me you didnt want me to die
    But it was to late now for my bed
    Was now drenched in my blood, I was dead
    You sat there w/ my head in your lap u had
    No clue your words could make me this sad

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    Re: You

    Please do not spam the forums with your poems. As per the rules, you can only submit 4 thread per day. I will be sending out an infraction, and close your existing poems that have been posted after your first 4 since yesterday.

    To quote the rules:

    Members are restricted to start no more than 4 threads a day. Please do not flood the forum with excessive, useless posting.
    Closing...

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