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    Otaku xxoxx is off to a good start xxoxx's Avatar
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    With you

    With you my heart will always stay...
    With you my thoughts will be every day…
    You remain to be the one that I regret letting get a way...
    Why didn't I say what I needed to say?
    You are the one I will always use my wishes on...
    You are the one I will always wish was never gone...
    I'll constantly wonder what went wrong...
    I'll forever think of what I could've done that was never done...


    Now how do you think in this …to be honest specially this not for anyone that's Meaning no him \ her… ….Oo

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    Re: With you

    it's pretty short, i think. maybe you could have added something more. ^^

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    Re: With you

    Awww....It seems so cute and so romantic through my eyes ad it short! I thik it would be amazing if it was long as well! I hope to see more of you poems!
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    This is really beautiful! I love this poem... it's short but has so many emotions in it- such sadness...
    Indeed I enjoy reading your poems!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Thank you sachiko ueto , KuwiRules145 , Lasura that's very cute ...i know it's short but that what i can say it ...

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    A job well done xxoxx-chan. *smiles back* I like it.... Its kinda short but its really nice... Nice one...

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    i like those short and sweer peoms like that. I really got the meaning of the poem too.

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