Running towards you,
I am like a metal object,
dragged into your magnet like embrace.
Powerful and tempting,
I don’t have the will to overcome it.
You are the red rose,
while I am a humble bee.
Hovering around you everyday,
Hoping you will bless me with a drop of honey.
Sweet drops of honey,
So I may continue building our manor slowly.
You are the moon,
beautiful and mysterious.
Even if you are far away,
my sunlight ray will always reach you.
I will keep you warm,
and will always make you feel good no matter where you are.
You are the big and strong tree,
I am the earth under you.
I will hold you and keep you in balance,
and keep you in balance.
I am yours,
I will be with you for all the time.
With you my life is more meaningful.
You gave me hope and purpose to live.
There is nothing more I cherish than you.
For you are my love…
Hmm... :) what u guys think? :hattip:
Damn!!! I'm jelous!!!! ^^ lol No, I'm not joking... this is a wonderful love poem, lo-ve-ly!!!!! I adore it, I really do ^^ It's very nice, I like how you've comared your love to the ways of nature... it's such an old way of writing love poems, still it seemed do cool... it didn't seem banal at all (and I find a lot of things banal)
A great work!!! ^^ I hope to see more...
Lol ^^ you should'nt be,... it's not that good... ^^ but ty... :)
yup.. i will do more ^^ i have some more... will add them up in tomorrow... :D
wow this one was really romantic
a love with true devotion cant be
replaced and how people are always
looking for that certain someone is really
sad , but this poem proves there is always
a way to find what you need from someone
who cares for you.
Wow that was so wonderful!!!! I can't lie I am jelouse!!!! This was so romantic I loved it rock on Ray!!!!!!!!!!!! ♥
ahh you 2 ^^ im truly flaterred thank you very much... but im still green.. :)
i'll do a better 1 next time~!
lol... ^^ he always has had a way with words.... anyway.... your poems are wonderful ray and romantic, she's right.
Originally Posted by Akura13
oO...Oh man I really love it...
It's very romantic Poem...And when you describe your feeling to her by using a natural thing *tree, rose,
Moon …ect*…she have a good luck…fabulous work..!!