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    " You Are.. "

    An old love poem I wrote a long time ago. Tell me what'cha think eh?

    You are the sun in the distant view
    You are the stars that I pray to
    You are the heart inside my soul
    You are the action I have taken; bold

    You are the past,
    The future,
    And the now,

    You are the love
    The hold
    The radiant smile

    You have no bounds to what you feel.
    You are the one,
    who before I kneel

    You are the timeless rose in the view of my eyes
    The crystal shining emanation in the dark
    You are the passion and love that never dies
    The explosion of happiness as feelings spark

    You are the sigh in the winds breath
    The only one to kiss me deeply with love
    You are the finest woman I've ever met
    With love you fill me fully with every hug

    As I hold you in my embrace
    The warmth of my body upon your face
    While you bury your head in my chest
    You know for you,
    I only want the very best.

    As I sigh with you in my arms
    I see you pulling me in,
    With your gracious charms
    Oh how the light illuminates my soul
    You fill me to the very rim, so very full
    With love that is true and powerful too
    A guide from the emptiness and the cold

    As I look upon you this night
    My soul and my heart take full blown flight
    With the winds at my back I soar with might
    On towards the future with you high in the plight

    You are my shining breeze
    That cools me when I'm warm
    Through your tender touch and passion so
    The love swirls and rages like a storm

    You are the eye within the storm of my troubled mind
    That brings me peace and tranquility
    Your voice the winds that wrap around me so
    Is a soothing song, I never wish to stop it's flow

    You are my love,
    My darling
    And my dove
    My sunshine howling
    Towards tomorrow

    For you are you,
    I hold you
    I kiss you
    I miss you
    When you are gone.

    You are my everlasting obsession
    though it is odd to say the least
    You are the prime example of complexion
    In my eyes as I see

    For you are you,
    It's all true
    I love you and only you
    You've given me your heart
    And I have given you mine

    Let the love flow in eternal waves of bold
    Bold colors,
    Bold shapes,
    Bold thoughts,
    Bold makes;
    A subtle swoop towards the unknown
    Towards what lies ahead for us
    Is surely in that zone

    But it matters not
    For you are you
    And I have that in my heart
    That love that flows from you

    Oh how I embrace it
    And repeatedly display it
    It is for you I am open to the world
    And it's ideas
    Although not always sane
    Many can really jumble up
    Any persons brain

    But alas it matters not,
    You are the focus here
    If not for you then for who?
    My sweetest Darling dear.

    "Walk in with Reason, and leave with Passion."

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    Re: " You Are.. "

    OMG! That some how made me felt heartfelt and kinda made me cry! I love every part!!!!!!!!!! Really! Especially the beginning!

    Quote Originally Posted by Tetsanosuke Kirikami View Post

    You are the sun in the distant view
    You are the stars that I pray to
    You are the heart inside my soul
    You are the action I have taken; bold
    Oh wow! I love this poem so much really! 200 points out of a 100!!!!!!!! Thats how much I love it!!! ^^

    I want to print this poem out now! ^^ Yah! ^^

    I want to see more ok! ^^
    Last edited by KuwiRules145; Dec 22, 2007 at 05:11 PM.
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    Quote Originally Posted by KuwiRules145 View Post
    OMG! That some how made felt heartfelt and kinda made me cry! I love every part!!!!!!!!!! Really! Especially the beginning!



    Oh wow! I love this poem so much really! 200 points out of a 100!!!!!!!! Thats how much I love it!!! ^^

    I want to print this poem out now! ^^ Yah! ^^

    I want to see more ok! ^^
    If you wanna print it please Credit me as you do so. I wouldn't want plagiarism going on. >.<

    But that you for the words of joyfulness. I wrote that when I fell in love for the first time. Even though it didn't work out I keep this work as well as others related to it.

    I like to know if my poetry has that kind of affect on people and it makes me happy when my works do so.

    So thank you very much. < Hits the Thanks button. >

    "Walk in with Reason, and leave with Passion."

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