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    You take away this pain I have felt for alone time. The tears pain that I would cry every night are now tears of joy that I cry for you. I think of you every day and every night. This poem is for you. The one I love, the one that has made me feel happiness like no other. I may not be with you now but my heart tells me we will able to have our chance soon. I wanted to run away from you but I’m glad I didn’t or I wouldn’t have been able to feel the joy I feel when I can talk to you. I hope that this is love because it feels like it .if its not then I don’t know what love really is.

    (idk im not really god at poems sorry)
    ‘Cause I’m broken when I’m open
    And I don’t feel like I am strong enough
    ‘Cause I’m broken when I’m lonesome
    And I don’t feel light when you’re gone away

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    Nice poem, a bit disturbed, but nice any way. Though for you, I'd recommend a job in writeing poetry books.

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    I agree, it was a very nice poem! Good job!

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