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    You believed

    You believed in me until the end
    through teary eyes I smiled
    I knew that this was the climax
    from here it's all free fall
    you believed in me
    and now it's done
    and you aren't here to see
    I felt the pride
    the rush and joy of it
    but now there is nothing
    nothing to accomplish for you now

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    Re: You believed

    your poem was really good^^ maybe if you spaced the lines out it would be easier to read^^ but in all good job=]
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    Re: You believed

    That was a beautiful poem, I don't even have the words that could describe it.

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    Re: You believed

    Hmm.. i did'nt know you write poems.. read mine sometimes and tell me what you think of it ^^

    and.. that poem is very nice... a break up to me is not a climax...it's a beggining of another... a heartbreaking start...but you will find something better in the future...

    *sings always look on the bright side of life from monthy phyton*

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    *nods*

    Very...sad...and very nicely written...

    I like the way where you gave a positive attitude and ended with a negative one...

    Lovely, Short yet very sad and sweet and straight to the point...Although...It seemed to me that you wondered a lot in this poem. :/

    ^_^

    -Zainab

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