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Reply With QuoteAwww....it seems so romantic and it's bit sad but I really do like it so I hope o see more of your work!!!
A soft sigh escapes my lips
A brief smile graces my features
Somehow these good qualities come out of me
The second you enter the room
You offer your hand
And I enter your arms
There is no where else
That I feel this safe and warm
On the darkest of days
You brighten my smile
On the toughest assignments
You give me strength to go on
Without you I could not flourish
I can't even make it an entire day
Your always on my mind
My thoughts you always sway
You can't imagine the pain I feel
When I have to depart from you
How I wish I were with you all the time
Then I never would have to feel as if I were about to die
The thought of another with you
Makes my blood boil
I do believe murder
Would be my first thought
I know I don't have to worry
But I still do
Oh well
You could only imagine what I'm goin through
Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.
Awww....it seems so romantic and it's bit sad but I really do like it so I hope o see more of your work!!!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
It was a good poem. It just shook me up after a while... Like, It started sweet. Then it got just a hint obsessive. Then it turned crazy at the end. But... I have secret... I LOVE crazy @_@ !
... Not Ever Again...
Oh my god... this poem is so lovely, so nice and still so sad and even anger can be seen somewhere... I love it... It almost made me cry...
Yes, sadness is the emotion I get from this one... I guess "Don't worry, be happy!" is the only thing I can do.
I really enjoy reading your poems so I will be waiting forward to the next one...
I love it !
Its a great poem i say,Its full of emotion in it and it shows.I dident pick up on eny problems in it it flowed nice to me.Very very good poem same way i feel all the time.
....Player Killer....??* "There is nothing to fear but F.E.A.R. it self -(F.E.A.R) " ??*
This poem here is indeed is really emotional and well organized and i would aslo include that this really states on how creative and as well how thoughtful you are to this person and i truly admire it and i shall try to be sincere to it no matter what obstacles it is trown at you/ you will not give up easily you will keep on going even if you have to protect on the one you love the most that is what makes this poem significance. I would like to see more in future regarding this one. ^-^
Magic intervenes when there is love in first sight.
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