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    You Couldn't Imagine

    A soft sigh escapes my lips
    A brief smile graces my features

    Somehow these good qualities come out of me
    The second you enter the room

    You offer your hand
    And I enter your arms

    There is no where else
    That I feel this safe and warm

    On the darkest of days
    You brighten my smile

    On the toughest assignments
    You give me strength to go on

    Without you I could not flourish
    I can't even make it an entire day

    Your always on my mind
    My thoughts you always sway

    You can't imagine the pain I feel
    When I have to depart from you

    How I wish I were with you all the time
    Then I never would have to feel as if I were about to die

    The thought of another with you
    Makes my blood boil

    I do believe murder
    Would be my first thought

    I know I don't have to worry
    But I still do

    Oh well
    You could only imagine what I'm goin through


    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: You Couldn't Imagine

    Awww....it seems so romantic and it's bit sad but I really do like it so I hope o see more of your work!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: You Couldn't Imagine

    It was a good poem. It just shook me up after a while... Like, It started sweet. Then it got just a hint obsessive. Then it turned crazy at the end. But... I have secret... I LOVE crazy @_@ !
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: You Couldn't Imagine

    Oh my god... this poem is so lovely, so nice and still so sad and even anger can be seen somewhere... I love it... It almost made me cry...
    Yes, sadness is the emotion I get from this one... I guess "Don't worry, be happy!" is the only thing I can do.
    I really enjoy reading your poems so I will be waiting forward to the next one...

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    Re: You Couldn't Imagine

    I love it !
    Its a great poem i say,Its full of emotion in it and it shows.I dident pick up on eny problems in it it flowed nice to me.Very very good poem same way i feel all the time.
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    Re: You Couldn't Imagine

    This poem here is indeed is really emotional and well organized and i would aslo include that this really states on how creative and as well how thoughtful you are to this person and i truly admire it and i shall try to be sincere to it no matter what obstacles it is trown at you/ you will not give up easily you will keep on going even if you have to protect on the one you love the most that is what makes this poem significance. I would like to see more in future regarding this one. ^-^

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