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    You Forgot us.

    You Forgot us
    I know you.....
    But you don't know me.
    I've Cried for you many times my friend.
    You Forgot all about us when you got out of your hell hole.
    You sit and let your friend drown in the currents of the black sea.
    Now that you're dying again you try to hold on to us.
    well tough.
    Your not welcome here anymore.

    hehe i was mad at a friend

    Neji hates when i hug other people.......
    he'll hit you with a hammer if he sees you....

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    Re: You Forgot us.

    Very nice poem, Neji. Too bad for your friend. He took advantage of you and others, and now he will get a taste of his own medicine. Nice work. I await to hear more from you.

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    Re: You Forgot us.

    Quote Originally Posted by The White Wolf View Post
    Very nice poem, Neji. Too bad for your friend. He took advantage of you and others, and now he will get a taste of his own medicine. Nice work. I await to hear more from you.
    ^^ thanks for the compliment the white wolf. ^^ hehe i like your poems too

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    Re: You Forgot us.

    I love poems which are short and straight to the point. Very well "executed", sir keep it up!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rave_Grip View Post
    I love poems which are short and straight to the point. Very well "executed", sir keep it up!
    IM A CHICK!!!!!! ><
    and thank you rave_grip ^^ hehe im glad you enjoyed the poem

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    Ahhh sorry Miss. Chick >_<
    I hope you feel better soon because of what your friend did to you

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rave_Grip View Post
    Ahhh sorry Miss. Chick >_<
    I hope you feel better soon because of what your friend did to you
    yes about that, dont call me miss.chick, call me krysie.
    and dont worry im cool now. i write to get rid of unwanted emotions. so im happy right now.

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    There was no development in the poem.. I felt I was reading the same thing over and over.
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