Very nice poem, Neji. Too bad for your friend. He took advantage of you and others, and now he will get a taste of his own medicine. Nice work. I await to hear more from you.
You Forgot us
I know you.....
But you don't know me.
I've Cried for you many times my friend.
You Forgot all about us when you got out of your hell hole.
You sit and let your friend drown in the currents of the black sea.
Now that you're dying again you try to hold on to us.
well tough.
Your not welcome here anymore.
hehe i was mad at a friend
Neji hates when i hug other people.......
he'll hit you with a hammer if he sees you....
Very nice poem, Neji. Too bad for your friend. He took advantage of you and others, and now he will get a taste of his own medicine. Nice work. I await to hear more from you.
I love poems which are short and straight to the point. Very well "executed", sirkeep it up!
Ahhh sorry Miss. Chick >_<
I hope you feel better soon because of what your friend did to you
There was no development in the poem.. I felt I was reading the same thing over and over.
Seduced by Flesh
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