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Sep 11, 2007, 02:36 AM
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 Angelic  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms
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 Credits: 49,629 | Was it you just now? Another love poem ^^ but I'm glad of this too... getting better from my writers block... hope you all like it ^^ Was it you just now? Holding me tight in your arms, Whispering my name softy in my ear, Brushing your cheek against mine, Sighting quietly, then fading away. Was it you? Or just wind? Was it you just now? Running your fingers over my body, Kissing my lips so gently, Taking away my pain with just one touch, Hugging me tight, then fading away. Was it you? Or could it be just the rain? Was it you just now? Tickling my feet mildly, Supporting me and helping me go on, Making me feel warm with just a smile, Wrapping his hands around me, not letting go. Was it you? Or was it the grass, the old, big tree, the sun and… *I turn around* For a moment you seem to be here, then fade away... *sigh* just a ghost of you… |
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Sep 11, 2007, 02:44 AM
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 1 )3^^( )N  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better...
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Credits: 59,725 | Re: Was it you just now? ^^ a ghost is better than nothing dear ^^ *pats ur head and hugs* darn...my eyes are watery...nicely done..  good job dear...*lee's nice guy pose*i'll be writing more for u and read more of urs... ^^ be sure to write more~  Last edited by RayMe; Sep 11, 2007 at 03:15 AM. |
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Sep 11, 2007, 02:52 AM
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| Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms
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Credits: 49,629 | Re: Was it you just now? Thank You soooo much Ray ^^ it means a lot... Oh... watery eyes? Does that mean you yawned hard while you read this? ^^ jk P.s. If I post all love poems I write I'd be banned!!! ^^ besides- u don't need too much of good |
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Sep 11, 2007, 03:14 AM
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| 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better...
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Credits: 59,725 | Re: Was it you just now? that must be alot.. o.O *shivers*  hmm..i am tired,...but im sure i did not yawn when i read that... hmmm ^^ u are welcomed dear ^^ |
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Sep 11, 2007, 04:25 AM
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Credits: 5,482 | Re: Was it you just now? wow Romantic one ..Lasura this the most romantic Poem I ever read it .. Running your fingers over my body, Kissing my lips so gently, Taking away my pain with just one touch, Hugging me tight, then fading away. Graet Poem ..opps I forget what I say more ...Keep up ..^^
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Sep 11, 2007, 08:50 AM
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Credits: 31,929 | Re: Was it you just now? Very beautiful and full of love and happiness!!!! Great job and I thought that it was very sweet!!
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Sep 11, 2007, 09:07 AM
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| Moving right along....  Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Friendly Fridley
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Credits: 3,654 | Re: Was it you just now? Wow.. this was beautiful. But it was sad to me. It reminded of the feeling of losing someone, and feeling them all around you. And Im not even sure if that was what the poem was about, but thats the feeling it gave to me. I guess feeling someone's presence even though they are not there... isnt really sad (just in the moments where that someone is missed)... Its.... uplifting, even moving. So in capturing that you've made a moving and uplifting poem.
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Sep 11, 2007, 02:18 PM
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Credits: 4,158 | Re: Was it you just now? nice poem lasura^^it almost made me cry*wipes the tears*sorry it remembered me of someone*sighs* keep up the good work
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Sep 11, 2007, 02:44 PM
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| Shining Star  Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Good question . . . where am I?
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