You Love Me?!

Shinigami's_Angel · Aug 06, 2006, 06:18 AM

Here's a song that I wrote just a few minutes ago.I guess it's a bit different form my others,but can't help what i feel when I write lol.Hope everybody like it.

Please comment,thanks.

Title-You Love Me?!

How can you be the one?
Are you really the one for Me?
You Confuse Me
You Betray Me
How can you be the one to Love Me?!

"Love Me"

I don't understand
How can this be
If this is what Destiny holds for Me
I don't want any part of it!
Just lemme go
And Leave Me be!

"Is It True?"

I wanna run away from everything
But for some odd reason You wont let Me
You say you Love Me
But all you do is Confuse Me
You hurt me by Betraying Me
How can you be the one to Love Me?!

"Do You?"

Destiny is such a Cruel thing
I don't want to believe the things that You say
Love or Hate?
I can't chosse between either of These!

"Do You Truely Love Me?!"

You Confuse my Mind and Heart
I wanna Love Ya
But my Mind is sayin I should be Hatein Ya
Destiny is so Cruel
Do You Really Love Me?
Or Is It Just Me?!...

*fayt lingod* · Aug 06, 2006, 06:23 AM

not really a fan of this kinda stuff but this ones OK in my book.

Shinigami's_Angel · Aug 06, 2006, 06:25 AM

Thanks for reading and commenting Fayt Lingod

!SilentAssasin · Aug 06, 2006, 10:28 AM

Thats pretty good. I like it!

*Baal* · Aug 06, 2006, 11:25 AM

It has a lot of ''me'' but i guess its coolie.

Shinigami's_Angel · Aug 06, 2006, 11:16 PM

Thank you very much SilentAssasin

I'm happy that you liked it.

Thanks Baal

And yes I know.It's a song,so sometimes words are repeated lol

*ketaro* · Aug 07, 2006, 07:52 PM

Love hurts doesn't it? nice poem man, i really like the intro.

Shinigami's_Angel · Aug 07, 2006, 07:54 PM

Thanks alot Ketaro

And yes,love does hurt....alot...

Reaper66 · Aug 07, 2006, 10:22 PM

I really liked it

liked the layout

very strong poem
nicely done shinigami

Shinigami's_Angel · Aug 07, 2006, 10:42 PM

Thanks for the great comment Reaper66

kakashi_sensei · Aug 07, 2006, 10:50 PM

Very impresive. I really like it. CONGRATULATIONS!!! keep the good work up!

-kakashi

Aug 06, 2006, 06:18 AM	#1 (permalink)
Shinigami's_Angel In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! watch's him sleep XD Posts: 687 Thanks: 40 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 3,363	You Love Me?! Here's a song that I wrote just a few minutes ago.I guess it's a bit different form my others,but can't help what i feel when I write lol.Hope everybody like it. Please comment,thanks. Title-You Love Me?! How can you be the one? Are you really the one for Me? You Confuse Me You Betray Me How can you be the one to Love Me?! "Love Me" I don't understand How can this be If this is what Destiny holds for Me I don't want any part of it! Just lemme go And Leave Me be! "Is It True?" I wanna run away from everything But for some odd reason You wont let Me You say you Love Me But all you do is Confuse Me You hurt me by Betraying Me How can you be the one to Love Me?! "Do You?" Destiny is such a Cruel thing I don't want to believe the things that You say Love or Hate? I can't chosse between either of These! "Do You Truely Love Me?!" You Confuse my Mind and Heart I wanna Love Ya But my Mind is sayin I should be Hatein Ya Destiny is so Cruel Do You Really Love Me? Or Is It Just Me?!... __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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Aug 06, 2006, 06:23 AM	#2 (permalink)
fayt lingod Guardian of Heaven Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: in front of my computer Posts: 1,502 Thanks: 2 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts Credits: 4,155	Re: You Love Me?! not really a fan of this kinda stuff but this ones OK in my book. __________________ thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy! click here myspace
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Aug 06, 2006, 06:25 AM	#3 (permalink)
Shinigami's_Angel In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! watch's him sleep XD Posts: 687 Thanks: 40 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 3,363	Re: You Love Me?! Thanks for reading and commenting Fayt Lingod __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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!SilentAssasin Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Hampton, Virginia Posts: 167 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: -200	Re: You Love Me?! Thats pretty good. I like it!
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Aug 06, 2006, 11:16 PM	#6 (permalink)
Shinigami's_Angel In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! watch's him sleep XD Posts: 687 Thanks: 40 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 3,363	Re: You Love Me?! Thank you very much SilentAssasin I'm happy that you liked it. Thanks Baal And yes I know.It's a song,so sometimes words are repeated lol __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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ketaro Its Over 9000! Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 4,226 Thanks: 27 Thanked 31 Times in 29 Posts Credits: 23,378	Re: You Love Me?! Love hurts doesn't it? nice poem man, i really like the intro.
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Aug 07, 2006, 07:54 PM	#8 (permalink)
Shinigami's_Angel In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! watch's him sleep XD Posts: 687 Thanks: 40 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 3,363	Re: You Love Me?! Thanks alot Ketaro And yes,love does hurt....alot... __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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Reaper66 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: in the ally taggin ur buildings Posts: 288 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 725	Re: You Love Me?! I really liked it liked the layout very strong poem nicely done shinigami __________________ (-)4(\|< 7(-)3 P14\|\\|37
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Shinigami's_Angel In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! watch's him sleep XD Posts: 687 Thanks: 40 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 3,363	Re: You Love Me?! Thanks for the great comment Reaper66 __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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kakashi_sensei Vampire Prince Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: right behind you ~don't move~ Posts: 538 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,400	Re: You Love Me?! Very impresive. I really like it. CONGRATULATIONS!!! keep the good work up! -kakashi __________________
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