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i like this poem from a dark point
of view hurting your self to make
him regret what he did to make
you go that far . thats what i get from this poem
i like it
ooooooookay so heres another old poem i wrote o.o [[i used to be the user blou]]:
As blood drips down from my wrist, a faint smile makes its way across my face.
Feeling the life being sucked from my soul, I think of only on thing:
My love for you.
How you said you loved me, and ripped my heart from my body.
How you made me smile and laugh. How you said you'd never hurt me.
[More] blood drips.
Thick red blankets covering my legs, the floor, my heart.
With the tragic knowledge of death, I smile. With this tear falling from my face, I smile.
I smile knowing you'll never hurt me...again.
Last edited by B.a.n.g.B.a.n.g.; Jun 17, 2006 at 11:53 AM.
i like this poem from a dark point
of view hurting your self to make
him regret what he did to make
you go that far . thats what i get from this poem
i like it
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
ah-!! thank you!! -^ ^- yea...thats the message....thnx!
a-re.. another love..poemm...
gomen.. let me be hinest.. i dont understand anything that relates to love and fondness... gomen... >.<
but i like the words that you use to describe~
gomen once again.... >.<
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Whoa, whoa, whoa!!! ^_^ Sweetness. Strong imagery you got there, B.a.n.g. Simply beautiful written, the words flew smoothly as well, which makes this poem a smooth read. Keep up the great and we all hope to read more. Keke. ^_^
I am entirely pleased with this poem of yours, except one thing, you are missing the letter "e" in the word "made" under the fifth line. ^_^
@aya chan: hmmmmmm...well...its not really lovey-dovey type poem...its more...you were an asshole to me and now imma kill myself...the person who feels this emotion from the poem is a complete idiot because he/she is killing themself over a person. -.-ll who does that?!
@kedar:lmfao!! haha...i'll change that....
Last edited by B.a.n.g.B.a.n.g.; Jun 17, 2006 at 11:53 AM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost
Whoa! this is a "darker" poem from the ones im used to reading.
Its a kinda poem that just lets out the feelings and emotions that they feel!
Good Job keep it up!!
the escape of life, hurt, pain...........to take one's life away.....to feel at peace....tht is something we feel tempted to do.......nice poem...keep it up
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
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