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    You & Me/ You Loving Me

    You & Me

    With the touch
    Of your hand

    With the feel
    Of your lips

    My heart skip
    A beat

    You smile
    I smile

    When I cry
    You make me happy

    I love you
    You love me

    Our souls
    Are one

    You brighten me
    Forever you say

    I remember
    Your promise


    You Loving Me

    You gave me everything
    Do anything to stay with me
    You promise to be with me forever
    You guarantee to keep it

    You held me in your arms
    Said them words "I love you"
    I smiled and felt like crying
    I told you ''I love you too"

    You changed me
    You pray for me
    You cry for me
    Why do so much for me?

    What have I done to
    Recieve what you give me?
    Have there been anything
    You wanted from me?

    You seem to love my smiles?
    Love my happiness;
    Love me for me
    Why is that?

    The most I gave you
    Was my heart....
    ♥ (¯'·._.·[GEISHA ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥

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    Re: You & Me/ You Loving Me

    Very sweet indeed Very VERY good attempt and and pleasing to read. KEEP IT UP!

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    Re: You & Me/ You Loving Me

    Thank you. I'm glad you guys like them. *smiles at Rave* You helped me
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    Re: You & Me/ You Loving Me

    *looks in* Lovey work~ o.o Rushil help thee~~
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    Re: You & Me/ You Loving Me

    those are really nice. ^^ keep it up

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    Re: You & Me/ You Loving Me

    I really liked it. It was a very pretty poem. Keep up the good work.

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    Re: You & Me/ You Loving Me

    A very sweet poem indeed! ^_^

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    Re: You & Me/ You Loving Me

    Awww,that was such a sweet and awesome poem!! I sooo loved this 1 as well. The words spoke of such a sweet love.It was wonderful and I truly enjoyed reading it. Can't wait 2 see what you come up with next.
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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