You & Me/ You Loving Me

*HieisLove* · Sep 22, 2006, 09:03 AM

You & Me

With the touch
Of your hand

With the feel
Of your lips

My heart skip
A beat

You smile
I smile

When I cry
You make me happy

I love you
You love me

Our souls
Are one

You brighten me
Forever you say

I remember
Your promise

You Loving Me

You gave me everything
Do anything to stay with me
You promise to be with me forever
You guarantee to keep it

You held me in your arms
Said them words "I love you"
I smiled and felt like crying
I told you ''I love you too"

You changed me
You pray for me
You cry for me
Why do so much for me?

What have I done to
Recieve what you give me?
Have there been anything
You wanted from me?

You seem to love my smiles?
Love my happiness;
Love me for me
Why is that?

The most I gave you
Was my heart....

*Rave_Grip* · Sep 22, 2006, 09:05 AM

Very sweet indeed

Very VERY good attempt and and pleasing to read. KEEP IT UP!

*HieisLove* · Sep 22, 2006, 09:12 AM

Thank you. I'm glad you guys like them. *smiles at Rave* You helped me

*Mr. K* · Sep 22, 2006, 05:56 PM

*looks in* Lovey work~ o.o Rushil help thee~~

vampireknight3041 · Sep 22, 2006, 06:25 PM

those are really nice. ^^ keep it up

*CherryBlossom18* · Sep 22, 2006, 07:30 PM

I really liked it. It was a very pretty poem. Keep up the good work.

Pride_Edward · Sep 23, 2006, 01:43 AM

A very sweet poem indeed! ^_^

*Shinigami's_Angel* · Sep 23, 2006, 02:52 AM

Awww,that was such a sweet and awesome poem!!

I sooo loved this 1 as well.

The words spoke of such a sweet love.It was wonderful and I truly enjoyed reading it.

Can't wait 2 see what you come up with next.

Sep 22, 2006, 09:03 AM	#1 (permalink)
HieisLove Getting Married 3-14-09 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: at home doing wedding planning Posts: 883 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,168	You & Me/ You Loving Me You & Me With the touch Of your hand With the feel Of your lips My heart skip A beat You smile I smile When I cry You make me happy I love you You love me Our souls Are one You brighten me Forever you say I remember Your promise You Loving Me You gave me everything Do anything to stay with me You promise to be with me forever You guarantee to keep it You held me in your arms Said them words "I love you" I smiled and felt like crying I told you ''I love you too" You changed me You pray for me You cry for me Why do so much for me? What have I done to Recieve what you give me? Have there been anything You wanted from me? You seem to love my smiles? Love my happiness; Love me for me Why is that? The most I gave you Was my heart.... __________________ ~Music Is My Boyfriend!!~
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Sep 22, 2006, 09:05 AM	#2 (permalink)
Rave_Grip Agreement is just A Greed Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion. Posts: 2,346 Thanks: 0 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 17,114	Re: You & Me/ You Loving Me Very sweet indeed Very VERY good attempt and and pleasing to read. KEEP IT UP! __________________ I tried. \| .:~My AO Gallery~:. \| \| .:~The AO Rules~:. \|
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Sep 22, 2006, 09:12 AM	#3 (permalink)
HieisLove Getting Married 3-14-09 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: at home doing wedding planning Posts: 883 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,168	Re: You & Me/ You Loving Me Thank you. I'm glad you guys like them. smiles at Rave You helped me __________________ ~Music Is My Boyfriend!!~
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Sep 22, 2006, 05:56 PM	#4 (permalink)
Mr. K THUMBSUCKING ADDICTION Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Alaska Posts: 1,269 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 3,606	Re: You & Me/ You Loving Me looks in Lovey work~ o.o Rushil help thee~~ __________________ ≥°≤ [?] █▓▒░░▒▓█ [?] ≥°≤ ◕ ◡ ◕;;;;[?]
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vampireknight3041 Newbie Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: in the internet Posts: 9 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 10	Re: You & Me/ You Loving Me those are really nice. ^^ keep it up __________________ http://www.animeonline.net/cyber-lou...-everyone.html -- Hassun
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Sep 22, 2006, 07:30 PM	#6 (permalink)
CherryBlossom18 Heavy Metal Goddess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun Posts: 578 Thanks: 1 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 2,696	Re: You & Me/ You Loving Me I really liked it. It was a very pretty poem. Keep up the good work.
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Pride_Edward Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 247 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: You & Me/ You Loving Me A very sweet poem indeed! ^_^ __________________ Our own site: http://www.fma-adikz.tk
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Sep 23, 2006, 02:52 AM	#8 (permalink)
Shinigami's_Angel In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! watch's him sleep XD Posts: 690 Thanks: 40 Thanked 9 Times in 8 Posts Credits: 3,825	Re: You & Me/ You Loving Me Awww,that was such a sweet and awesome poem!! I sooo loved this 1 as well. The words spoke of such a sweet love.It was wonderful and I truly enjoyed reading it. Can't wait 2 see what you come up with next. __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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