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Sep 27, 2006, 04:17 PM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: My own little world
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 Credits: 410 | You n' Me I could see the hurt in your eyes I could tell that you really wanted to cry You look at me with such confusion You say, "Everything's an illusion." I wish I could believe you I wish I knew what to do How could you make me feel so sad When the time where it all went bad? Wipe away your tears Face all your fears Cause I'm not... I'm not afraid No, I'm not afraid no more Just to protect you I'm not afraid I'm not afraid anymore To face the fears for you and me I could see the truth in your lies I really want this pain to die You could say it's an illusion I'd always think it's a refusion To go on further and face your fears Are those really your tears? How could this turn out so bad? I've never felt so mad Wipe away your tears Face all your fears Cause I'm not... I'm not afraid No, I can't be afraid no more Just to protect you I'm not afraid I'm not afraid anymore To face the fears for you and me Hold my hand, hold it tight Me and you are going to be alright Are we...? Go on, face your fears Don't cry Baby, wipe away your tears Don't lie Cause I... I'm not afraid No, I'm not afraid no more Just to protect you I'm not afraid I'm not afraid anymore To face the fears for you...and me...
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Sep 27, 2006, 07:08 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: I live in a Place where I'am Truly Happy and that would be with All My Friends
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Credits: 458 | Re: You n' Me wow....I think this is impressive I never thought I would see a poem like this again...
__________________  I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am. A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao. http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm |
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Sep 27, 2006, 07:15 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Unknown
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Credits: 1,484 | Re: You n' Me Wow, that's really good. I would like to hear that in a song, that would be cool.
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Sep 27, 2006, 07:35 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: My own little world
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Credits: 410 | Re: You n' Me Wow, like thank you lol. I wrote it during detention (yes, twice). lol it took me a while to come up with all that. from 2:50 to almost 4:00 pm =O! lol thank you for your compliments =)
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Oct 01, 2006, 11:18 AM
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 Agreement is just A Greed  Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion.
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Credits: 17,114 | Really neat, I love it keep it up! Nice use of words and emotins, truly a masterpiece and one of the best 5/5! |
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Oct 01, 2006, 05:13 PM
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| Kyle's mom is a bytch  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In solitude
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Credits: 7,388 | beautiful poem chica. i like it alot. nice words and they blend in nicely
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Oct 01, 2006, 07:51 PM
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| S.E.L - sexy etna lover  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Mayaguez
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Credits: 409 | ''U dont have to be confused or afraid of life cuz u got me in ur side for life'' i meant that its really well expressed and full of emotion one true poem that ur heart wont forget.
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Oct 01, 2006, 07:53 PM
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 Heavy Metal Goddess  Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun
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Credits: 2,696 | That is a great poem. I've felt like that before. Nice job and I look forward to reading your next one. |
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Oct 02, 2006, 02:17 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: My own little world
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Credits: 410 | thank you all! i felt it and decided to write a song about that. =) yeah i will write another one, just gotta wait to feel it so i could write it.
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