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    You never knew

    How could you not of known what I felt
    How could I loose my heart to you
    Something I promised myself never to do again
    Your words are never far from my mind
    The things you said, feelings you showed
    Where they all a lie
    My dreams are filled with you
    But when asleep tears of pain are rolling down my face
    How did you manage to get so close to me
    When before I knew what had truly happened
    You were gone and I felt my heart breaking
    The only thing that I can hold onto
    The faint light from my flame
    My saving grace is that
    You never knew

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    Re: You never knew

    ....*cries a little* That..was so beatiful!!!You are a great!!!

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    wow...that was truly beautiful......I sometimes feel exactly like that...like questioning myself with these words....


    anywayz good job well done

    hope to read more from you

    zainab

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    Re: You never knew

    Great job Kelly very nice. keep up the good work. I like it and want to see more.
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    Re: You never knew

    that was so beautiful and sad , but it is awesome. OMGOSH good job!! =)

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    Re: You never knew

    Quote Originally Posted by fireandice View Post
    How could you not of known what I felt
    How could I loose my heart to you
    Something I promised myself never to do again
    Your words are never far from my mind
    The things you said, feelings you showed
    Where they all a lie
    My dreams are filled with you
    But when asleep tears of pain are rolling down my face
    How did you manage to get so close to me
    When before I knew what had truly happened
    You were gone and I felt my heart breaking
    The only thing that I can hold onto
    The faint light from my flame
    My saving grace is that
    You never knew
    How tragic! I'm here for you, Killer!!!!!!!

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    Re: You never knew

    Wow thanks everybody. I almost didn't post this one due to the fact that I had a headache when I put it together. I still don't think it sounds right. But thank you all very much for the praise.

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    Re: You never knew

    A very sad and tragic one...Even so ! it is still very good under the circumstances you were writing it under.Maybe a happier one next time eh ? not so sad and tragic.
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