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Old Oct 02, 2007, 12:31 PM   #1 (permalink)
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You never knew

How could you not of known what I felt
How could I loose my heart to you
Something I promised myself never to do again
Your words are never far from my mind
The things you said, feelings you showed
Where they all a lie
My dreams are filled with you
But when asleep tears of pain are rolling down my face
How did you manage to get so close to me
When before I knew what had truly happened
You were gone and I felt my heart breaking
The only thing that I can hold onto
The faint light from my flame
My saving grace is that
You never knew
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Old Oct 02, 2007, 01:04 PM   #2 (permalink)
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....*cries a little* That..was so beatiful!!!You are a great!!!
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Old Oct 02, 2007, 01:27 PM   #3 (permalink)
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wow...that was truly beautiful......I sometimes feel exactly like that...like questioning myself with these words....


anywayz good job well done

hope to read more from you

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Old Oct 02, 2007, 01:35 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: You never knew

Great job Kelly very nice. keep up the good work. I like it and want to see more.
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Old Oct 02, 2007, 01:40 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: You never knew

that was so beautiful and sad , but it is awesome. OMGOSH good job!! =)
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Old Oct 02, 2007, 08:23 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: You never knew

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How could you not of known what I felt
How could I loose my heart to you
Something I promised myself never to do again
Your words are never far from my mind
The things you said, feelings you showed
Where they all a lie
My dreams are filled with you
But when asleep tears of pain are rolling down my face
How did you manage to get so close to me
When before I knew what had truly happened
You were gone and I felt my heart breaking
The only thing that I can hold onto
The faint light from my flame
My saving grace is that
You never knew
How tragic! I'm here for you, Killer!!!!!!!
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Old Oct 02, 2007, 09:45 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Wow thanks everybody. I almost didn't post this one due to the fact that I had a headache when I put it together. I still don't think it sounds right. But thank you all very much for the praise.
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Old Oct 02, 2007, 10:04 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Re: You never knew

A very sad and tragic one...Even so ! it is still very good under the circumstances you were writing it under.Maybe a happier one next time eh ? not so sad and tragic.
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Old Oct 03, 2007, 08:48 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Re: You never knew

Hmm it seems divine been around kissing girls by the cheek xD jk man

This truly is beautiful.. ^^ nicely done... agreed with kogs and others
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