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You are the One
You are the One
You’re the only one I think about
You’re the only one I really care about
You’re the only one I dream about
You’re the only one I couldn’t be without
You are more beautiful than a field of roses
More breathtaking than a flock of doves
More perfect than a sky of angels
You captured my heart, my love
I’ve searched the world for someone who dares
To reckon with the likes of me
Finally found that special person
And that tells me that we were meant to be
With the world around us falling
There’s no one else but you
I’d trust my life to you a thousand times
And hope you’d trust me too
I need to find a way to your heart
Because I cant imagine us apart
Lets go away to a secret paradise
That’s where I want to spend the rest of our lives
i think this was my best poem, made for a girl that went to my HS, inspiration for most of my poems. One of my friends commented that this poem was simply awesome because i used reckon in it, i would have to agree
lol
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Re: You are the One
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww!
I love it.
The way you descride how you think of her is just beutifull.
I love it alot.
And yes useing rekon was a great idea.lol.
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Yes, it really is great- you can be sure of it because I read it even though I'm not in the mood for love poems now ^^
It's truly beautiful, very sweet, full of love but not too banal- I like it a lot.... Nice work!!!
You should post more ^^ so I'll be watining forward for some more poems, k? I really will be... so.... better watch out... ^^ lol
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This is so full of love and that made it absolutely adorible.Especially because it so well follows a rhyme scheme. Fabulous. I hope to see a lot of your writing here, keep it up. Your definately good.
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sadly, ive quit writing poems, my inspiration has, well, walked away from my life. considering this feedback though, i just might have to find something worth writing about xP
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Re: You are the One
Your too talented to let some girl be your ONLY insperation. And your definately too talented to let some girl walk away with your talent! Write about her leaving! Write about moving on. Write about bugs. Anything. just don't stop writing, besides it's good therepy.
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i dont think i could force myself to write about bugs.
who wants to write about something you kill everyday lawl
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Re: You are the One
Well it was just a suggestion. Write about killing bugs! Theres tons of things out there to write about you just gotta find somethin' that tickles you.
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