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    For you are the one

    Here is another poem and in my opinon its the best one i hve written

    For You Are The One

    For you I would climb
    The highest mountain peak
    Swim the deepest ocean
    Your love I do seek.

    For you I would cross
    The rivers most wide
    Walk the hottest desert sand
    To have you by my side.

    For you are the one
    Who makes me whole
    You've captured my heart
    And touched my soul.

    For you are the one
    That stepped out of my dreams
    Gave me new hope
    Showed me what love means.

    For you alone
    Are my reason to live
    For the compassion you show
    And the care that you give.

    You came into my life
    And made me complete
    Each time I see you
    My heart skips a beat.

    For you define beauty
    In both body and mind
    Your soft, gentle face
    More beauty I'll ne'er find.

    For you are the one
    God sent from above
    The angel I needed
    For whom I do love.



    Plz tell me if i can make it better.
    I found him and I love him with all my heart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Re: For you are the one

    Wow...just wow.

    You're getting better and better sweetheart. Keep up the good work.
    We gotta make our choices...because in the end we are who we choose to be.

    Because choice is the only real freedom any of us have.

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    Re: For you are the one

    kewlio!! ^-^ thatz awesome!!! i think its awesome the way it is you should write a book of poems I'D TOTALLY BUY ONE OF THOSE BOOKS!! veryveryvery good job
    Death is interesting

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    Re: For you are the one

    Thank you love. Miss you............................................... ...........................................
    I found him and I love him with all my heart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Re: For you are the one

    I miss you too. I just hope this can last the rest of our lives.
    We gotta make our choices...because in the end we are who we choose to be.

    Because choice is the only real freedom any of us have.

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    Re: For you are the one

    For some odd reason, I quite find find your poem so amusing because my way of thinking fits from the fourth to the last one.And, yes I definitely agrees with you Neha.This is one of your best works.I'll keep reading your poems.BTW, I really liked your style of writing.

    The best stanzas ever in this poem:
    For you alone
    Are my reason to live
    For the compassion you show
    And the care that you give.

    You came into my life
    And made me complete
    Each time I see you
    My heart skips a beat.

    For you define beauty
    In both body and mind
    Your soft, gentle face
    More beauty I'll ne'er find.

    For you are the one
    God sent from above
    The angel I needed
    For whom I do love.
    Cool!
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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    Re: For you are the one

    That was awesome! id have to agree with ^ i loved those lines. Youve got flow man!

    Death is as generation is, a composition of like elements, and a decompostion into the same.

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