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May 22, 2006, 03:58 PM
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 Credits: 210 | To be with you right now and forever To be with you right now and forever Lying with you in my arms I shiver Your warmth next to me And I can’t get myself To tilt my head And kiss you I don’t now why I want to so badly Yet somewhere inside I feel so unworthy For you are so great And I’m just a boy But my feelings are strong That’s why I tried To get your hand into mine And hug you so tightly But still as I lay there After kissing your hand You kissed my neck The heat of your lips Just to kiss your fiery lips To show you how I felt But then I had to go and I was alone In my room with my music so loud Now I just wait for our next private meeting When I can kiss you and show you my feelings
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May 22, 2006, 04:31 PM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: where the true warriors fight
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Credits: 1,395 | Re: To be with you right now and forever *smiles* u and these love poems my friend....they are getting to me.....u are very good...i also like this one...please feel free to wrtie more^^ food luck my friend *bows*
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May 23, 2006, 11:00 AM
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Credits: 210 | Re: To be with you right now and forever Im only writing them because I'm new to this kind of stuff.
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May 23, 2006, 11:07 AM
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  AO's Demon Slayer  Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Protecting my loved one.
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Credits: 1,464 | Re: To be with you right now and forever the realism is there dude. Tht's good man. I wrote something with realism but didnt go into detail. Anyways keep it up
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May 23, 2006, 11:34 AM
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| Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: May 2006 Location: Streets of Compton,
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Credits: 606 | Re: To be with you right now and forever So is this happening or is it something the writer wants? Quote:
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May 24, 2006, 06:48 AM
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Credits: 210 | Re: To be with you right now and forever this actually happened. so yeah.
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May 24, 2006, 07:49 AM
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Credits: 587 | Re: To be with you right now and forever This is nice. I feel like it's better than my two poems... >.>
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May 24, 2006, 01:39 PM
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Credits: 210 | Re: To be with you right now and forever I'm submiting a new one soon. Actually right now.
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