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    To be with you right now and forever

    To be with you right now and forever
    Lying with you in my arms I shiver
    Your warmth next to me
    And I can’t get myself
    To tilt my head
    And kiss you
    I don’t now why
    I want to so badly
    Yet somewhere inside
    I feel so unworthy
    For you are so great
    And I’m just a boy
    But my feelings are strong
    That’s why I tried
    To get your hand into mine
    And hug you so tightly
    But still as I lay there
    After kissing your hand
    You kissed my neck
    The heat of your lips
    Just to kiss your fiery lips
    To show you how I felt
    But then I had to go and I was alone
    In my room with my music so loud
    Now I just wait for our next private meeting
    When I can kiss you and show you my feelings
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    Re: To be with you right now and forever

    *smiles* u and these love poems my friend....they are getting to me.....u are very good...i also like this one...please feel free to wrtie more^^ food luck my friend *bows*
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    Re: To be with you right now and forever

    Im only writing them because I'm new to this kind of stuff.
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    Re: To be with you right now and forever

    the realism is there dude. Tht's good man. I wrote something with realism but didnt go into detail. Anyways keep it up

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: To be with you right now and forever

    So is this happening or is it something the writer wants?

    After kissing your hand
    You kissed my neck
    The heat of your lips
    Just to kiss your fiery lips
    XD

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    Re: To be with you right now and forever

    this actually happened. so yeah.
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    Re: To be with you right now and forever

    This is nice. I feel like it's better than my two poems... >.>
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    I do, I care for you because I can. I can because I want to. And I want to... because you said that I couldn't...
    Yet... Who... would love a demon like me...?


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    Re: To be with you right now and forever

    I'm submiting a new one soon. Actually right now.
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