You Saved Me From Myself

Akura13 · Jul 01, 2007, 11:46 PM

As I sit here
Alone in my darkness
I see a light
Penetraiting my sorrow
I relize it is you
Your hapiness shining
My sorrow has been overcome
With pure hapiness
Because of you
I'm not sad anymore
Just being by your side
Makes me feel
Like I can do anything
You saved me
From myself

KuwiRules145 · Jul 01, 2007, 11:49 PM

Awwwww......it's just so cute!!!! Really! I call it like true love! Really! It's just so romantic to me!!!! I loved it!!! I hope to see more!

Akura13 · Jul 02, 2007, 12:13 AM

Awww, kiwi noodle, your so nice! *hugs kiwi noodle* TT_TT thank you! And lol for once I didn't write a depressing one......

crono_chris · Jul 02, 2007, 04:24 AM

Now, for me to sit back and think for a slight moment, you have pure talent dude, I mean there's always one very something about a poem, depending on why and who you plead to write it to..... to declare foward that inner side of yourself, to not write the favored words, but add that real feeling. All I can say is there's a reason i've just brought that up, you here have over done placing your feelings foward, because this poem as far is simply wonderful and the ladies would always love this poem dude, I mean yeah fair dooos it's coming from a damn guy sitting here, but you've certainly bloomed the romance in a passionate way. I'd love to see more work from you, this is a pure work of art!

Akura13 · Jul 02, 2007, 11:56 AM

LOL LOL uhhhhh, I'm a girl! ^_^ but anyways thanks for the complement!! LOL LOL

*atomik_sprout* · Jul 02, 2007, 02:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Akura13

As I sit here
Alone in my darkness
I see a light
Penetraiting my sorrow
I relize it is you
Your hapiness shining
My sorrow has been overcome
With pure hapiness
Because of you
I'm not sad anymore
Just being by your side
Makes me feel
Like I can do anything
You saved me
From myself

I like this poem so much! It reminds me of the times I've had where someone pops in my life and saves me from doin' something stupid--saved me from hurting others or myself.

Mad props on this one! You deserve a gold star! ^_^

*Lasura* · Jul 05, 2007, 11:04 AM

Yes, a nice poem, very... describtive I guess, because I could just imagine it all... the darkness and the light, and a happy girl by a guys side... nice ^^

A really nice work here Akura... with every poem I like your poems more and more ^^

Jul 01, 2007, 11:46 PM	#1 (permalink)
Akura13 ★Phantasmagoria★ Join Date: May 2007 Location: Chicago (I wish) Posts: 801 Thanks: 16 Thanked 37 Times in 34 Posts Credits: 20,197	You Saved Me From Myself As I sit here Alone in my darkness I see a light Penetraiting my sorrow I relize it is you Your hapiness shining My sorrow has been overcome With pure hapiness Because of you I'm not sad anymore Just being by your side Makes me feel Like I can do anything You saved me From myself __________________ Phantasmagoria Lives On In The Hearts Of Their Fans, Japanese AND English! "Because it's okay to hide* your tears." - LM.C (Lovely Mocochang)*
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KuwiRules145 Tournaments Won: 2 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 3 Thanked 24 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 13,226	Re: You Saved Me From Myself Awwwww......it's just so cute!!!! Really! I call it like true love! Really! It's just so romantic to me!!!! I loved it!!! I hope to see more! __________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ♡♥Anime Life♥♡
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Akura13 ★Phantasmagoria★ Join Date: May 2007 Location: Chicago (I wish) Posts: 801 Thanks: 16 Thanked 37 Times in 34 Posts Credits: 20,197	Re: You Saved Me From Myself Awww, kiwi noodle, your so nice! hugs kiwi noodle TT_TT thank you! And lol for once I didn't write a depressing one...... __________________ Phantasmagoria Lives On In The Hearts Of Their Fans, Japanese AND English! "Because it's okay to hide* your tears." - LM.C (Lovely Mocochang)*
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crono_chris Newbie Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: UK, come on you obviously know were in the UK Posts: 57 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 630	Re: You Saved Me From Myself Now, for me to sit back and think for a slight moment, you have pure talent dude, I mean there's always one very something about a poem, depending on why and who you plead to write it to..... to declare foward that inner side of yourself, to not write the favored words, but add that real feeling. All I can say is there's a reason i've just brought that up, you here have over done placing your feelings foward, because this poem as far is simply wonderful and the ladies would always love this poem dude, I mean yeah fair dooos it's coming from a damn guy sitting here, but you've certainly bloomed the romance in a passionate way. I'd love to see more work from you, this is a pure work of art!
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Akura13 ★Phantasmagoria★ Join Date: May 2007 Location: Chicago (I wish) Posts: 801 Thanks: 16 Thanked 37 Times in 34 Posts Credits: 20,197	Re: You Saved Me From Myself LOL LOL uhhhhh, I'm a girl! ^_^ but anyways thanks for the complement!! LOL LOL __________________ Phantasmagoria Lives On In The Hearts Of Their Fans, Japanese AND English! "Because it's okay to hide* your tears." - LM.C (Lovely Mocochang)*
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Lasura Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms Posts: 1,872 Thanks: 56 Thanked 35 Times in 32 Posts Credits: 49,629	Re: You Saved Me From Myself Yes, a nice poem, very... describtive I guess, because I could just imagine it all... the darkness and the light, and a happy girl by a guys side... nice ^^ A really nice work here Akura... with every poem I like your poems more and more ^^ __________________ My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
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