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    You Saved Me From Myself

    As I sit here
    Alone in my darkness
    I see a light
    Penetraiting my sorrow
    I relize it is you
    Your hapiness shining
    My sorrow has been overcome
    With pure hapiness
    Because of you
    I'm not sad anymore
    Just being by your side
    Makes me feel
    Like I can do anything
    You saved me
    From myself



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    Re: You Saved Me From Myself

    Awwwww......it's just so cute!!!! Really! I call it like true love! Really! It's just so romantic to me!!!! I loved it!!! I hope to see more!
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    Re: You Saved Me From Myself

    Awww, kiwi noodle, your so nice! *hugs kiwi noodle* TT_TT thank you! And lol for once I didn't write a depressing one......



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    Re: You Saved Me From Myself

    Now, for me to sit back and think for a slight moment, you have pure talent dude, I mean there's always one very something about a poem, depending on why and who you plead to write it to..... to declare foward that inner side of yourself, to not write the favored words, but add that real feeling. All I can say is there's a reason i've just brought that up, you here have over done placing your feelings foward, because this poem as far is simply wonderful and the ladies would always love this poem dude, I mean yeah fair dooos it's coming from a damn guy sitting here, but you've certainly bloomed the romance in a passionate way. I'd love to see more work from you, this is a pure work of art!

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    LOL LOL uhhhhh, I'm a girl! ^_^ but anyways thanks for the complement!! LOL LOL



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    Re: You Saved Me From Myself

    Quote Originally Posted by Akura13 View Post
    As I sit here
    Alone in my darkness
    I see a light
    Penetraiting my sorrow
    I relize it is you
    Your hapiness shining
    My sorrow has been overcome
    With pure hapiness
    Because of you
    I'm not sad anymore
    Just being by your side
    Makes me feel
    Like I can do anything
    You saved me
    From myself
    I like this poem so much! It reminds me of the times I've had where someone pops in my life and saves me from doin' something stupid--saved me from hurting others or myself.

    Mad props on this one! You deserve a gold star! ^_^


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    Re: You Saved Me From Myself

    Yes, a nice poem, very... describtive I guess, because I could just imagine it all... the darkness and the light, and a happy girl by a guys side... nice ^^

    A really nice work here Akura... with every poem I like your poems more and more ^^

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