Wouldn't this be slightly offensive to a friend?
Unless ofcourse you meant your friend to be the speaker then she'd be like a mermaid or something and it'd be a HUGE compliment.
I love the imagery and the consistency throughout. It's really quite wonderful. I can see the whole thing and even picture eyes under the ocean as I assume the point of view of the person being objectified. Which you made easy. It's great and speaks volumes of beauty and real beauty. And the age old contest between knowledge and pretty faces.
<10> (If the olympic judges can do it then I should be able to give out tens as well :P)