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    With you sometimes

    Held in your arms, closed eyes
    Forgetting everything else, your body leaned against mine
    My hand through your warm and long hair
    You and me

    Longing for your touch, your oh, so sweet kisses
    Your passion dissolved with your affection
    Watching the amalgamate in your crystal clear eyes

    Long hugs
    Passionate kisses
    Warm and gentle touches,
    Sweet and loving smiles,
    Those wonderful eyes…

    So close…

    Ironically you just exist in my thoughts,
    My feelings conceived you, knowing I’ll never,
    Ever feel your touch, your warmth, everything,
    Just felt by an imaginary assuring existence

    It’s so hard when your heart opposes all that,
    To be felt cold, lost and confused,
    Not to have anything to do with love
    That silly, foolish, imprudent emotion

    It’s even harder to be pushed around,
    Left alone to shiver,
    Live up your own,
    Surviving if you’re lucky

    I don’t want to cry, I don’t want to be a sadist
    I don’t want to be insecure
    I need someone to pick me…

    I don’t want to fall in love
    I want to feel it

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    Re: With you sometimes

    Quote Originally Posted by Rave_Grip View Post
    Held in your arms, closed eyes
    Forgetting everything else, your body leaned against mine
    My hand through your warm and long hair
    You and me

    Longing for your touch, your oh, so sweet kisses
    Your passion dissolved with your affection
    Watching the amalgamate in your crystal clear eyes

    Long hugs
    Passionate kisses
    Warm and gentle touches,
    Sweet and loving smiles,
    Those wonderful eyes…

    So close…

    Ironically you just exist in my thoughts,
    My feelings conceived you, knowing I’ll never,
    Ever feel your touch, your warmth, everything,
    Just felt by an imaginary assuring existence

    It’s so hard when your heart opposes all that,
    To be felt cold, lost and confused,
    Not to have anything to do with love
    That silly, foolish, imprudent emotion

    It’s even harder to be pushed around,
    Left alone to shiver,
    Live up your own,
    Surviving if you’re lucky

    I don’t want to cry, I don’t want to be a sadist
    I don’t want to be insecure
    I need someone to pick me…

    I don’t want to fall in love
    I want to feel it
    Hey Rave! I gotta give you props on this poem. Probably because I can relate very much to it.

    Thats a feeling I know well, and could never imagine it put into words until now.

    Hats off to you for this poem.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: With you sometimes

    awww rave sooo romaic and sad though TT__TT but i thought u didnt like the lovey dovey huh but its great i would gave u 1000 but i cant it can only be 10/10 sorry but its great

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    Re: With you sometimes

    I'll alwayz remember this poem because it'll help me when I have my 1st real heartbreak! Thank u so much 4 this sweet poem.

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    Re: With you sometimes

    wow rave it's anice romanic poem ...that's very nice ....
    it sweet poem ..

    Foolish beating

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    Re: With you sometimes

    Awww..... What a romantic poem! That was really sweet! I love it! I hope to see more in the future!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: With you sometimes

    Sweet indeed... and sad...
    I like this poem very much, for it's all about what i feel...

    By the way, thank you for helping me understand what HIM meaned with "No, I don't wanna fall in love...." in their song "Wicked Game" (ok, I know it's not really their song...)

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: With you sometimes

    I think that it is a lovely poem... even if it might makes people feel as though their boyfriend or girlfriend actually feels that way about them... but yea i think it is a nice poem and i like your word choice...^^

    can't wait to hear another one... i'll have to send ya some idea's...^^
    keep ya on this track...

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