You Wouldn't Care..... - Page 2

[Pandora's_Box] · Aug 03, 2007, 04:17 PM

Hate to sound heartless, but so be it.I have to agree with Tuarus, do some potery and mass destruction.

Spooked_Ninja · Aug 11, 2007, 08:12 AM

it's nice...still kinda busted/broken/crying/bewildered tho

don't really make me think

....maybe i think too much is all

it's still good tho...make a great song

*NevesElocin* · Aug 11, 2007, 10:40 AM

I enjoyed it very much. But thats just because I like sad poetry. You did a very good job. Not enough for me to fall in love with it but enough for me not to hate it. Very nice poem. Is it your first?

*RayMe* · Aug 12, 2007, 02:41 AM

@.@ :/ what kind of a guy is that -.- i would say.... Buttobaste aru~! (lets kick his ass)

btw ^^ i enjoyed ur poem...short and straight to the point and easily understandable

5/10~!

Akura13 · Aug 12, 2007, 04:24 PM

Thank you all very much I appreciate your comments! I appreciate it! And NevesElocin, this isn't my first time.....

falloutboygirl · Aug 14, 2007, 12:48 PM

Such a beautiful poem. I think you shoul keep writing like this. Just b-e-a-utiful.

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Aug 03, 2007, 04:17 PM	#12 (permalink)
[Pandora's_Box] Newbie Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Hell Posts: 59 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	Re: You Wouldn't Care..... Hate to sound heartless, but so be it.I have to agree with Tuarus, do some potery and mass destruction. __________________ "Let fall the weak, and build to the strong."
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Spooked_Ninja Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Pay up and I'll tell! :D Posts: 139 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 532	Re: You Wouldn't Care..... it's nice...still kinda busted/broken/crying/bewildered tho don't really make me think....maybe i think too much is all it's still good tho...make a great song
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Aug 11, 2007, 10:40 AM	#14 (permalink)
NevesElocin ~The Mistress~ Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Hell Posts: 750 Thanks: 36 Thanked 17 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 12,602	Re: You Wouldn't Care..... I enjoyed it very much. But thats just because I like sad poetry. You did a very good job. Not enough for me to fall in love with it but enough for me not to hate it. Very nice poem. Is it your first? __________________ Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.
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RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,612 Thanks: 57 Thanked 28 Times in 25 Posts Credits: 59,725	Re: You Wouldn't Care..... @.@ :/ what kind of a guy is that -.- i would say.... Buttobaste aru~! (lets kick his ass) btw ^^ i enjoyed ur poem...short and straight to the point and easily understandable 5/10~! __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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Akura13 ★Phantasmagoria★ Join Date: May 2007 Location: Chicago (I wish) Posts: 801 Thanks: 16 Thanked 37 Times in 34 Posts Credits: 20,197	Re: You Wouldn't Care..... Thank you all very much I appreciate your comments! I appreciate it! And NevesElocin, this isn't my first time..... __________________ Phantasmagoria Lives On In The Hearts Of Their Fans, Japanese AND English! "Because it's okay to hide* your tears." - LM.C (Lovely Mocochang)*
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