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Thread: You Wouldn't Care.....

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    Re: You Wouldn't Care.....

    Frankly, This rings of all the other emo poems I've seen on here. Some advice, Live for yourself first, then worry about others later.....you'll be happier that way. Do some poetry about mass destruction, and maybe I'd be impressed.

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    Re: You Wouldn't Care.....

    Oh I totaly know how you feel!!!! I think the same all the time- it's the worst thing!!!! And the thing is I know it's not true but still can't get over the feeling that I'm not cared about!!!

    I hope you too know that it's probably not true- if you've influenced from real life to write this- because no matter how evil a guy might seem he robably would care...

    Ok, now I'm done with my mumbling and can say that this is a very nice poem and I hope to see more! ^^

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    Re: You Wouldn't Care.....

    OMG!!!!!! Thi8s is an awesome poem!!!!! But it so sad so WAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's really is just so sad really! But this poem is just so awesome and great!!!!! So I hope to see more!!!!
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    Re: You Wouldn't Care.....

    Hate to sound heartless, but so be it.I have to agree with Tuarus, do some potery and mass destruction.
    "Let fall the weak, and build to the strong."

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    it's nice...still kinda busted/broken/crying/bewildered tho
    don't really make me think....maybe i think too much is all
    it's still good tho...make a great song

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    Re: You Wouldn't Care.....

    I enjoyed it very much. But thats just because I like sad poetry. You did a very good job. Not enough for me to fall in love with it but enough for me not to hate it. Very nice poem. Is it your first?

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    Re: You Wouldn't Care.....

    @.@ :/ what kind of a guy is that -.- i would say.... Buttobaste aru~! (lets kick his ass) btw ^^ i enjoyed ur poem...short and straight to the point and easily understandable 5/10~!

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    Re: You Wouldn't Care.....

    Thank you all very much I appreciate your comments! I appreciate it! And NevesElocin, this isn't my first time.....



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