To Your Arms I rest

raja_psyche · Oct 09, 2006, 07:38 AM

To Your Arms I rest

Let me die in your arms,
Allow my body feel the warmth
The warmth that I never felt
The warmth, I always longed for.

Tears falling from your eyes
Feels like water that cleanses my soul,
Tears of a kind-hearted being
Is what I need to be free.

Thy breath is like music in my heart,
Your heartbeat gives me the desire
Leave a smile at the cruel world
The world that turned its back on me.

< ^^ feel free to post comments and critiques, thanks for reading.

*Mr. K* · Oct 09, 2006, 07:48 AM

^_^ Nice~

I like it~

._. Short!

>.> Kinda repeats its self. I get the warmth part fine. ok ~ ^-^

raja_psyche · Oct 09, 2006, 08:00 AM

Thanks Mr. K for posting your comment. i appreciate

<<<feels like dying???

nightboyz · Oct 09, 2006, 09:37 AM

Very impresive, I see the whole story in just a fue powerful lines. most injoyed.

*jaderabbit* · Oct 09, 2006, 10:27 PM

FINALLY!
YOu so rock a person taht makes a poem that i enjoy and find nothing wrong with!

To Your Arms I rest

Let me die in your arms,
Allow my body feel the warmth
The warmth that I never felt
The warmth, I always longed for.
THis is the opening its great it gets to the point and tells me what im reading about! I really like the feeling of love and life and tragedy that is displayed so brilliantly in the first 4 lines!
Tears falling from your eyes
Feels like water that cleanses my soul,
Tears of a kind-hearted being
Is what I need to be free.
Love captivates me and sends me into a dreamlike state, tears of joy and not of hate makes me free, a pure kind heart.

!
Thy breath is like music in my heart,
Your heartbeat gives me the desire
Leave a smile at the cruel world
The world that turned its back on me.
i notice not music to ur ears but to ur heart, very touching! there being there "heartbeat" gives you desire the world that trurned its back on you must have denyed ur love. so kind of a tragic end but leaves me pondering if the 2 of you got back together or did fate tear you apart?

raja_psyche · Oct 09, 2006, 11:03 PM

@ nightboyz: thanks for your comment ^^ i do appreciate.

@jaderabbit: wow thanks for a heart-touching comment. ^^

Quote:

so kind of a tragic end but leaves me pondering if the 2 of you got back together or did fate tear you apart?

about that question... fate did tear me apart...

*Shinigami's_Angel* · Oct 11, 2006, 10:05 PM

Wow! Awesome poem Raja!!! I just love your work!!

There was so much emotion in this,it was breath takeing.Awesome job Raja!!

raja_psyche · Oct 12, 2006, 02:10 AM

Thanks Shini for your comment about my poem ^^ thanks again ^^

SousukeSagara · Oct 12, 2006, 07:05 AM

This poem makes my heart, born again...
Those three very short stanzas were inserted, to my body, to my soul, and to my heart... Great job... *Claps slowly...*

raja_psyche · Oct 12, 2006, 07:14 AM

Thanks for your wonderful comment Sousuke! ^^ i really do appreciate.

edit: ~it seems that something is bothering you... it seems you are sad...

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raja_psyche Otaku Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the Pearl of the Orient Posts: 393 Thanks: 5 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,547	To Your Arms I rest To Your Arms I rest Let me die in your arms, Allow my body feel the warmth The warmth that I never felt The warmth, I always longed for. Tears falling from your eyes Feels like water that cleanses my soul, Tears of a kind-hearted being Is what I need to be free. Thy breath is like music in my heart, Your heartbeat gives me the desire Leave a smile at the cruel world The world that turned its back on me. < ^^ feel free to post comments and critiques, thanks for reading. __________________ Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
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Mr. K THUMBSUCKING ADDICTION Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Alaska Posts: 1,269 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 3,606	^_^ Nice~ I like it~ ._. Short! >.> Kinda repeats its self. I get the warmth part fine. ok ~ ^-^
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raja_psyche Otaku Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the Pearl of the Orient Posts: 393 Thanks: 5 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,547	Thanks Mr. K for posting your comment. i appreciate <<<feels like dying??? __________________ Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
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nightboyz Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Where sence means nothing... Posts: 225 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 873	Very impresive, I see the whole story in just a fue powerful lines. most injoyed.
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jaderabbit Cheetos Overlord Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: The World Posts: 3,652 Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 3 Posts Credits: 7,474	FINALLY! YOu so rock a person taht makes a poem that i enjoy and find nothing wrong with! To Your Arms I rest Let me die in your arms, Allow my body feel the warmth The warmth that I never felt The warmth, I always longed for. THis is the opening its great it gets to the point and tells me what im reading about! I really like the feeling of love and life and tragedy that is displayed so brilliantly in the first 4 lines! Tears falling from your eyes Feels like water that cleanses my soul, Tears of a kind-hearted being Is what I need to be free. Love captivates me and sends me into a dreamlike state, tears of joy and not of hate makes me free, a pure kind heart. ! Thy breath is like music in my heart, Your heartbeat gives me the desire Leave a smile at the cruel world The world that turned its back on me. i notice not music to ur ears but to ur heart, very touching! there being there "heartbeat" gives you desire the world that trurned its back on you must have denyed ur love. so kind of a tragic end but leaves me pondering if the 2 of you got back together or did fate tear you apart? __________________ -Just another green eyed angel, distorted by mans love for hate- \|THE INFAMOUS\|The Host\|Twilight Series\|Twilight Movie\|Untouched!\|
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Shinigami's_Angel In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! watch's him sleep XD Posts: 690 Thanks: 40 Thanked 9 Times in 8 Posts Credits: 3,825	Wow! Awesome poem Raja!!! I just love your work!! There was so much emotion in this,it was breath takeing.Awesome job Raja!! __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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raja_psyche Otaku Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the Pearl of the Orient Posts: 393 Thanks: 5 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,547	Thanks Shini for your comment about my poem ^^ thanks again ^^ __________________ Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
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SousukeSagara Mercenary Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: War zones around the globe... Posts: 528 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 901	This poem makes my heart, born again... Those three very short stanzas were inserted, to my body, to my soul, and to my heart... Great job... Claps slowly... __________________
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raja_psyche Otaku Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the Pearl of the Orient Posts: 393 Thanks: 5 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,547	Thanks for your wonderful comment Sousuke! ^^ i really do appreciate. edit: ~it seems that something is bothering you... it seems you are sad... __________________ Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
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