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Your a Beautiful lie,
all the pain you caused making me want to die.
Hell,I wish you'd Just drop dead,
all those ****ing Lies you said.
I hate you and I hate you guts,
your the only reason my wrists have cuts.
So the day you hear I'm dead,
don't you DARE cry,Instead.
Remeber that you were the cause,
you were one of my main flaws.
A strong poem with a few lines. This one interests me. The rhyme scheme does not hinder the flow of the poem. keep up the good work.
i love this poem stright to the point and
no punches held back life at all blamming
is always the one thing people do ,its a constant
and the way you used it here isa very good example.
i cant wait to read another
That was a very harsh poem. It was like you wrote a suicide note to someone who really done you wrong. I liked it none the less and I hope your next one is a little less dark than this one was.