Your Guardian Angel(revised)

SousukeSagara · Aug 15, 2007, 03:45 PM

When I see your smile,
My tears I can't replace fall. .
But now that I'm stronger I've figured out,
How this world turns cold,
And breaks thru my soul. .
Now I'll find deep inside me,
I can be the one. .

Seasons are changing,
And waves are crashing,
And stars are falling all for us. .
Days grow longer,
And nights grow shorter
I can show you I can be the one. .

`Cause your my true love,
My whole heart. .
Please don't throw it away. .
`Cause I'm here for you. .
Please don't walk away,
Please tell me you'll stay. .

Used me as you will,
Pull my strings just for a thrill. .
I know I'll be okay,
Though my skies are turning grey. .

I will never let you fall. .
I'll stand up with you forever. .
I'll be there for you thru it all. .
Even if savi'n you sends me to heaven. .

raja_psyche · Aug 15, 2007, 07:47 PM

The title of this poem, really suits to the entire poem. The poem showed passion, like staying with the one you loved eventhough it would eventually cost... your life. It showed genuine selflessness... This poem, inflicted me sadness, because of devotion...

Keep up the good work sergeant!

*The GunGrave of Trigun* · Aug 15, 2007, 08:14 PM

I would not have called your poem that but it was pretty good your poem.

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SousukeSagara Mercenary Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: War zones around the globe... Posts: 528 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 901	Your Guardian Angel(revised) When I see your smile, My tears I can't replace fall. . But now that I'm stronger I've figured out, How this world turns cold, And breaks thru my soul. . Now I'll find deep inside me, I can be the one. . Seasons are changing, And waves are crashing, And stars are falling all for us. . Days grow longer, And nights grow shorter I can show you I can be the one. . `Cause your my true love, My whole heart. . Please don't throw it away. . `Cause I'm here for you. . Please don't walk away, Please tell me you'll stay. . Used me as you will, Pull my strings just for a thrill. . I know I'll be okay, Though my skies are turning grey. . I will never let you fall. . I'll stand up with you forever. . I'll be there for you thru it all. . Even if savi'n you sends me to heaven. . __________________
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raja_psyche Otaku Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the Pearl of the Orient Posts: 393 Thanks: 5 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,547	Re: Your Guardian Angel(revised) The title of this poem, really suits to the entire poem. The poem showed passion, like staying with the one you loved eventhough it would eventually cost... your life. It showed genuine selflessness... This poem, inflicted me sadness, because of devotion... Keep up the good work sergeant! __________________ Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
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