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Reply With QuoteThats A Damn Lie!!!!!!!!!!!
I Dont Remember Any Promise!! And I Didnt Use Or Betray You!!!
I gave my trust to you and you
throw it back into my face,the
promice you made to me was noithing
but a joke,you laugfh like i am a fool.
And all i can do is watch you slip away
i thought you were better than this,
and you prove me wrong with lies,
how can you not see what you did?
The pain i cant take it anymore
i just want to walk away, if i
really do who will care for you
then? i wish i had the amswear.
Faith you spit that in my face
when you went down that rode
how easy it must before you
to make a joke from my trust.
Hate its really out of place becasue
thats not how i feel.who i feel i
like a funeral that my trust for hope
you is almost there,and it sickens me.
Love you must do this think you dont care
about how i was there for you,you might
be right and i dont really know but if you dont '
then tell me so.
this poem is for somone who i though was
doing right and they broke there promice
think i was just a joke they never cared
for how i tried to help them at all.
Last edited by HolderOfTheDarkChalice; Sep 16, 2006 at 03:18 AM.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Thats A Damn Lie!!!!!!!!!!!
I Dont Remember Any Promise!! And I Didnt Use Or Betray You!!!
Born to rule, raised to lead, taught to establish: The African Queen
it was just a poem it wasnt directe at you ,sorry if you thought it was
but it was about people in genaral it sounds like i is but it isnt
th explanation was for the reader to under stand the poem it wasnt meant for
you at all. but if thats what you got from it i am sorry
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Well I won't curse, I really liked your poem. I could tell how you had just about had it with this person and no matter how hard you tried to make them see that you care, they just don't get it. I understand your feelings but sometimes to some selfish, lost people, your trust doesn't matter at all. The poem was very good, keep it up.
A white rose no longer alone
I know who's heart it is to represent
I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
This was awesome big bro.Another awesome poem wrote by you.But I really liked it.It had a very good meaning 2 it.It truly hurts when someone you trust so much betrays you in anyway.But all in all,awesome job once again bir bro
Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
It was a great poem. Sounds like how most people's relationships end up and that is so sad.
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