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    Your Joke

    I gave my trust to you and you
    throw it back into my face,the
    promice you made to me was noithing
    but a joke,you laugfh like i am a fool.

    And all i can do is watch you slip away
    i thought you were better than this,
    and you prove me wrong with lies,
    how can you not see what you did?

    The pain i cant take it anymore
    i just want to walk away, if i
    really do who will care for you
    then? i wish i had the amswear.

    Faith you spit that in my face
    when you went down that rode
    how easy it must before you
    to make a joke from my trust.

    Hate its really out of place becasue
    thats not how i feel.who i feel i
    like a funeral that my trust for hope
    you is almost there,and it sickens me.

    Love you must do this think you dont care
    about how i was there for you,you might
    be right and i dont really know but if you dont '
    then tell me so.


    this poem is for somone who i though was
    doing right and they broke there promice
    think i was just a joke they never cared
    for how i tried to help them at all.
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    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Your Joke

    Thats A Damn Lie!!!!!!!!!!!
    I Dont Remember Any Promise!! And I Didnt Use Or Betray You!!!

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    Re: Your Joke

    it was just a poem it wasnt directe at you ,sorry if you thought it was
    but it was about people in genaral it sounds like i is but it isnt
    th explanation was for the reader to under stand the poem it wasnt meant for
    you at all. but if thats what you got from it i am sorry
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Your Joke

    Well I won't curse, I really liked your poem. I could tell how you had just about had it with this person and no matter how hard you tried to make them see that you care, they just don't get it. I understand your feelings but sometimes to some selfish, lost people, your trust doesn't matter at all. The poem was very good, keep it up.
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    Re: Your Joke

    This was awesome big bro.Another awesome poem wrote by you. But I really liked it.It had a very good meaning 2 it.It truly hurts when someone you trust so much betrays you in anyway.But all in all,awesome job once again bir bro
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Your Joke

    It was a great poem. Sounds like how most people's relationships end up and that is so sad.

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