Your Love

*Violent* · Sep 25, 2006, 11:36 AM

Your love has truley,
Been great to me.
Not one tear,
Since the day you came my way.
I want you to know I'd gladly go,
Anywhere you want me to go.
I'm happy as I ever could be,
You have come to me and changed my whole world.
What a wonderful day,
It's so amazing to be loved by you.
And its so amazing,
I could stay forever.
Love brought us together,
I will never leave you.
And I have been waiting for so long,
For a love like you.
Love... its so wonderful.

Comment please

*Kasai* · Sep 26, 2006, 02:50 AM

It's a cute poem. Though spelling is a smalissue.

*Violent* · Sep 26, 2006, 11:41 AM

Ahhh thanks for the comment O.o was wonderin if anyone read it lol.

!Shinobi- · Sep 27, 2006, 12:03 PM

It's great there is meaning to it
need orginazation but other wise it is great

*Violent* · Sep 27, 2006, 01:01 PM

Thanks

well I think its time for a new genre of poems for me ~ got to many love poems..

Sep 25, 2006, 11:36 AM	#1 (permalink)
Violent Waiting... Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NC Posts: 1,499 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 4,581	Your Love Your love has truley, Been great to me. Not one tear, Since the day you came my way. I want you to know I'd gladly go, Anywhere you want me to go. I'm happy as I ever could be, You have come to me and changed my whole world. What a wonderful day, It's so amazing to be loved by you. And its so amazing, I could stay forever. Love brought us together, I will never leave you. And I have been waiting for so long, For a love like you. Love... its so wonderful. Comment please __________________ Obey the forum rules!
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Sep 26, 2006, 02:50 AM	#2 (permalink)
Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,490	Re: Your Love It's a cute poem. Though spelling is a smalissue. __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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Violent Waiting... Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NC Posts: 1,499 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 4,581	Re: Your Love Ahhh thanks for the comment O.o was wonderin if anyone read it lol. __________________ Obey the forum rules!
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Violent Waiting... Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NC Posts: 1,499 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 4,581	Re: Your Love Thanks well I think its time for a new genre of poems for me ~ got to many love poems.. __________________ Obey the forum rules!
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