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    Your Love

    Your love has truley,
    Been great to me.
    Not one tear,
    Since the day you came my way.
    I want you to know I'd gladly go,
    Anywhere you want me to go.
    I'm happy as I ever could be,
    You have come to me and changed my whole world.
    What a wonderful day,
    It's so amazing to be loved by you.
    And its so amazing,
    I could stay forever.
    Love brought us together,
    I will never leave you.
    And I have been waiting for so long,
    For a love like you.
    Love... its so wonderful.

    Comment please

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    I'm on my grind in search to find whats on my mind, its one of a kind!

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    Re: Your Love

    It's a cute poem. Though spelling is a smalissue.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Ahhh thanks for the comment O.o was wonderin if anyone read it lol.

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    Re: Your Love

    It's great there is meaning to it
    need orginazation but other wise it is great

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    Re: Your Love

    Thanks well I think its time for a new genre of poems for me ~ got to many love poems..

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