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Reply With QuoteThat was such a sweet poem. That's how I feel about my boyfriend. He means everything to me and I never wanna lose him. Don't worry I'm sure your girlfriend will love it.
You melted my icy heart
Struck a match in the darkness
Nothing I've done was as smart
As opening my soul to your kindness.
My heart beats for your love
Finally found a feeling I can trust
Your smile as sweet as a dove
Melts through a soul of decay and rust
Happiness reflected in my eyes
Tears of sadness stop their flow
The sorrow inside recedes and dies
All I want is for our love to grow
Lost in your loving gaze
I see our future in your eyes
Seeing through the haze
This feeling takes my heart to the skies
I barely recall life before
Our memories have made it fade away
I don't want to be alone anymore
You are my light of day
I love holding you to me
Our love in my blood like a river as it flows
This is how it will always be
Beautiful as winter with pure white snow
A long life with you
It's what I long for
Nothing else will do
All I want is you, nothing more
Your love flows through me like blood
You and I will always be
Sharing love deeper than any flood
You are the one for me
I wrote this poem for my girlfriend. I plan to give it to her with her presents on Valentine's Day. Do you think she'll like it? Any ideas on how to make it better? Opinions are appreciated.
You are not your job. You are not your bank account. You are not the contents of your wallet. You are not your ****ing Khakis. We are the all seeing all dancing crap of the world. You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake you are the same rotting organic matter as everything else. We are all part of the same compost heap.
That was such a sweet poem. That's how I feel about my boyfriend. He means everything to me and I never wanna lose him. Don't worry I'm sure your girlfriend will love it.
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Thanks so much I love it!
well it was good, and i think to make it a little better, talk about her appearance and how she lights up ur day. and also, try next time to rhyme larger words to make the description better, like for example instead of using beauty, use exquisiteness because it sounds more indepth and stuff. but nice poemshe will like it.
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