Your Pain My Once Love

*HieisLove* · Oct 15, 2006, 08:31 AM

The pain you're feeling
(I'm sorry)

The broken heart I caused you
(I'm sorry)

Never did I mean to
(Forgive me)

The tears you cry
(I cry)

I want to wipe away
(Please don't cry)

I hate that you feel this way
(Please forgive)

I love you
(But I moved on)

I hold you in my heart
(So deeply)

You want me be happy?
(You said it comes first)

But still you chained me
(Not letting me go)

Please let me love him!
(I'm sorry but I love him)

Why do this?
(Why?)

Don't you even care? That you hurting me too?
(I love him and will be with him!)

Release me from the shackles you hold me in
(Please accept I'm with with him now)

*whispers* Don't cry
(I know it hurts)

I didn't shut you out
(I'll never leave you behind)

I may love him and with him
(But I still hold you in my heart)

*ketaro* · Oct 15, 2006, 08:34 AM

*claps* nice poem heislove, i really like it.

*HieisLove* · Oct 15, 2006, 08:37 AM

Thank you. I'm glad you like it

*Kasai* · Oct 15, 2006, 08:40 AM

Hmm. I'm not liking the conversation going on. I think it could go another way. Nevertheless, awesome job at creativity.

*HieisLove* · Oct 15, 2006, 08:41 AM

Thanks Kasai-san. I'll make a better poem although its actually a song

SousukeSagara · Oct 16, 2006, 08:06 AM

I remember some with this poem... Now I'm suffering, great job...

*Shinigami's_Angel* · Oct 18, 2006, 12:02 PM

WOW!!! Amazing song Cierra!!! It was beautiful!!! Awesome job as always!!

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Oct 18, 2006, 12:16 PM

very awesome poem i loved it because you show how
somepeople never let go when you have already moved on
they act like kids sometimes when thid happen's , amnd is sad that they do
i like the poem very much

*CherryBlossom18* · Oct 18, 2006, 03:52 PM

It was a great poem. It had alot of emotion in it and told the story of how eventhough a relationship had ended some people just can't let go. Good job and I look forward to reading more of your work.

darkflames · Oct 18, 2006, 03:53 PM

That truely was a good poem. nice job

*HieisLove* · Nov 14, 2006, 11:11 AM

Thanks you guys. I'm glad ya'll enjoy my work. I don't think they're all that great but as long as you like it! *meow* =^.^=

Oct 15, 2006, 08:31 AM	#1 (permalink)
HieisLove Getting Married 3-14-09 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: at home doing wedding planning Posts: 883 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,168	Your Pain My Once Love The pain you're feeling (I'm sorry) The broken heart I caused you (I'm sorry) Never did I mean to (Forgive me) The tears you cry (I cry) I want to wipe away (Please don't cry) I hate that you feel this way (Please forgive) I love you (But I moved on) I hold you in my heart (So deeply) You want me be happy? (You said it comes first) But still you chained me (Not letting me go) Please let me love him! (I'm sorry but I love him) Why do this? (Why?) Don't you even care? That you hurting me too? (I love him and will be with him!) Release me from the shackles you hold me in (Please accept I'm with with him now) whispers Don't cry (I know it hurts) I didn't shut you out (I'll never leave you behind) I may love him and with him (But I still hold you in my heart) __________________ ~Music Is My Boyfriend!!~
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Oct 15, 2006, 08:34 AM	#2 (permalink)
ketaro Its Over 9000! Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 4,250 Thanks: 27 Thanked 34 Times in 32 Posts Credits: 24,570	Re: Your Pain My Once Love claps nice poem heislove, i really like it.
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HieisLove Getting Married 3-14-09 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: at home doing wedding planning Posts: 883 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,168	Re: Your Pain My Once Love Thank you. I'm glad you like it __________________ ~Music Is My Boyfriend!!~
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Oct 15, 2006, 08:40 AM	#4 (permalink)
Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,616	Re: Your Pain My Once Love Hmm. I'm not liking the conversation going on. I think it could go another way. Nevertheless, awesome job at creativity. __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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HieisLove Getting Married 3-14-09 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: at home doing wedding planning Posts: 883 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,168	Re: Your Pain My Once Love Thanks Kasai-san. I'll make a better poem although its actually a song __________________ ~Music Is My Boyfriend!!~
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Oct 16, 2006, 08:06 AM	#6 (permalink)
SousukeSagara Mercenary Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: War zones around the globe... Posts: 528 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 901	Re: Your Pain My Once Love I remember some with this poem... Now I'm suffering, great job... __________________
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Shinigami's_Angel In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! watch's him sleep XD Posts: 690 Thanks: 40 Thanked 9 Times in 8 Posts Credits: 3,825	Re: Your Pain My Once Love WOW!!! Amazing song Cierra!!! It was beautiful!!! Awesome job as always!! __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,842 Thanks: 34 Thanked 33 Times in 31 Posts Credits: 5,730	Re: Your Pain My Once Love very awesome poem i loved it because you show how somepeople never let go when you have already moved on they act like kids sometimes when thid happen's , amnd is sad that they do i like the poem very much __________________
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Oct 18, 2006, 03:52 PM	#9 (permalink)
CherryBlossom18 Heavy Metal Goddess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun Posts: 578 Thanks: 1 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 2,696	Re: Your Pain My Once Love It was a great poem. It had alot of emotion in it and told the story of how eventhough a relationship had ended some people just can't let go. Good job and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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darkflames Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: hell Posts: 183 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 943	Re: Your Pain My Once Love That truely was a good poem. nice job __________________
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Nov 14, 2006, 11:11 AM	#11 (permalink)
HieisLove Getting Married 3-14-09 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: at home doing wedding planning Posts: 883 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,168	Re: Your Pain My Once Love Thanks you guys. I'm glad ya'll enjoy my work. I don't think they're all that great but as long as you like it! meow =^.^= __________________ ~Music Is My Boyfriend!!~
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